Close My Eyes~

a wee love scribble

I close my eyes when you speak

your wistful words a nectar'd lullaby

my safe haven amidst the stars,

I dance on moonbeam's shine,

 heart skips to your rhythmic tune

'never have to cry'

reigning in melodies of sweet harmony

my world's a better place,

and I owe it all to you...

Reviews

[s y e]

// my safe haven amidst the stars,
I dance on moonbeams shine
my heart skips to your rhythmic tune //

Definitely a safe haven Frieda - this is simply divine. You have such lovely lines here. I loved how you said my safe haven, that put a massive smile on my face because that is how I feel when I read your wonderful poetry.

Such a beautiful, romantic poem. And the music is just perfect, Michael is a great singer, I love him.

A huge sigh, flip flops & all that jazz! x

[Frieda P]

Awh thanks sweetie, must be where I got it from. ;-) Huge sigh....woooooooooo! MWAH xo

[songstress]

My, You've done it again. I love the line," I close my eyes when you speak [,]your wistful words a nectar'd lullaby." it truly is a sweet line. It's as though when you write you paint a vibrant picture. I love it. And your song choice, Michael bubble perfect. I can't wait to see the next thing you give us Frieda. this is art.

[Frieda P]

What an utterly luverly thing to say songstress, thanks so much.

[Giggling Star]

A nectar'd lullaby is such fitting description for many of my favored listens. You have an uncanny ability to create a phrase for the way I feel but can't seem to verbalized. This very lovely.

[Frieda P]

Awh what a sweet thing to say stargazer, grazie mille....

[Giggling Star]

I'm full of it ... sweetness that is :)

[Raymond Federle]

Shot of insulin for one please! My blood sugar just went up 350 points! Excellent! :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, you always make me smile Raymond, thanks so much! :-)

[Jack...]

Frieda, your words this morning flow in harmony with so many hearts beating, staring up at the heavens dreaming of these exact words, that they find their way to them from one they so adore. Beauty blooms from this wonderful bouquet of poetic thoughts you bring to us. To read this, feel this and even taste this sends those wonderful tiny shivers up and down my spine. My sense are a'dance this morning to the melody of this enchanting poem. If I were to hear these words spoken to me I would never want to wake up from that dream.

Truly a beautiful poem you have delivered to our door today.

[Frieda P]

Your response leaves me breathless Jack, I like it better than my poem, thanks so much my sweet friend. x

[Shaquana Adams]

Lovely as usual Frieda :) Great job!

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Shaquana :-)

[Scott Metro]

A very nice tribute to someone.
You always spin a poetic rainbow..


Admiration
Scott

[Frieda P]

Thanks Scott, Mr Bublé gets the credit for this one....his music is inspiring.

[Scott Metro]

Yes he is good...a mellow fellow with sounds of an era faded.
You're welcome..
Scott

[Frieda P]

Sometimes you're just in the mood for those old fashioned tunes, he really does them superbly.....

[Scott Metro]

That he does...once in a while I really enjoy that style...I like Sinatra for that very reason.

[Frieda P]

That goes without saying, Frankie is the best and he's from joisey ;-)

[Scott Metro]

he he he..I never held that against him....LOL......

[Frieda P]

LOL!!!!!!!!!