Close My Eyes~

a wee love scribble

I close my eyes when you speak

your wistful words a nectar'd lullaby

my safe haven amidst the stars,

I dance on moonbeam's shine,

 heart skips to your rhythmic tune

'never have to cry'

reigning in melodies of sweet harmony

my world's a better place,

and I owe it all to you...

Reviews

[s y e]

// my safe haven amidst the stars,
I dance on moonbeams shine
my heart skips to your rhythmic tune //

Definitely a safe haven Frieda - this is simply divine. You have such lovely lines here. I loved how you said my safe haven, that put a massive smile on my face because that is how I feel when I read your wonderful poetry.

Such a beautiful, romantic poem. And the music is just perfect, Michael is a great singer, I love him.

A huge sigh, flip flops & all that jazz! x

[Frieda P]

Awh thanks sweetie, must be where I got it from. ;-) Huge sigh....woooooooooo! MWAH xo

[Tena Luvs]

"heart skips to your rhythmic tune

'never have to cry'

reigning in melodies of sweet harmony

my world's a better place,"

My favorite part. A short poem but lovely in every sentence,

[Vidya Bacchus]

It is nice when you have this feeling about someone.That they will always be there for you :)

[Frieda P]

If I remember correctly, yep. ;-) Thanks so much Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[kublakhan27]

No, you should never have to cry Mrs.R, not when you can pen such irresistible cries from the heart...should this piece be addressed to someone, I envy him. Nobody does nectar'd lullabies like you my dear ;) xo

[Frieda P]

It's addressed to my poetic sweetheart, thanks Benji, muchly appreciated. ;-)

[kublakhan27]

You know it's a pleasure Mrs. R ;)

[Cassie]

awwww...this is extremely beautiful. I loved enjoyed it.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Cassie, you just put a huge smile on my face this early morning.

[Trace]

Simply Beautiful........

Trace

[Frieda P]

Thank you Trace, glad you enjoyed...

[oscardelamarca]

Frieda your very nice words of truth and fair voice for this poem I sincerely congratulate

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed.

[Rachelle]

Frieda does it again! Words effortlessly flowing in gentle cascades....

[Frieda P]

Awh what a sweet thing to say sweetbind, thanks so much....

[Night]

Awe Frieda....you are quite the Romantic....sweet and lovely....perfectly chosen blend of a few words spoke volumes here. I loved it....=)

[Frieda P]

Awh thanks so my friend, sometimes I can be sweet too. ;-) Grazie mille!

[Night]

My pleasure.....-)

[00000000000000000000000..]

Powerful words in lovers limbs:) Awesome and special when all is due:) Great lines dear friend:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Jon. :-)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Your very welcome;-)

[MsJewel]

A beautiful little love scribble for the one you love...
I love the last line (sigh) so lovely!

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Coming from the queen of love scribbles I"m honored Julie! ;-)