~and then once again, Exhale Poetry

~and then once again, Exhale Poetry

A Poem by Frieda P

My ink bleeds onto the page
        wandering from the mind's vortex 
  spiral twisters, compulsions 
                      and desires  
  wafting through rambling quills
     hearts devour'd & core exposed
        unstrung melodies of spirit's zest,
         flutters of gossamer wings on zephyr'
s glide
            touching moments unravel'd,
                  nature running poppy wild

               ...and then once again, 
  ~EXHALE POETRY~
start
    the 
          process
                over
                      again
  from the top one more time
    gliding on a dance floor
           of rhythmic seduction
             is it rhyme or reason
                 that keeps me coming back to you












© 2014 Frieda P


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Hi, I wonder how a conversation with you would go down for I believe you speak poetry throughout. I'm reading your work and I just see this poetess who sleeps, eats and breathes poetry. I'm amazed and in awe of your ability and your work. "flutters of gossamer wings on zephyr's glide
touching moments unravel'd," The silky sway to the rhythm. I can see the class of lady and the passion she embeds in her way of life. Wow, I need to Exhale, taking this all in, such a monumental amount of passion, I loved it.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Sweet thing to say but hardly, if I spoke this way every day I'm sure they'd lock me away for sure. .. read more



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You exhale beautifully.... we just can't stop breathing can we ? :) xoxo

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I should hope not Lily Mae, this is therapy for moi ;-) xoxo
You are captivating my heart, my Poetic sister !!!

How this bleeds your ink through and through!...
What you have expressed is layered with possibilities...

Beautiful, lyrical possibilities!!!!

Love this, Friedalicious!~xoxo~

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Woo, doing the happy dance sweet Robbie...love that word 'captivating'...thanks so much my dear frie.. read more
Robbie~xoxo~

10 Years Ago

Always a pleasure, Gypsy Butterfly!~xoxo~:D
We are all here to burn burn and turn into smoke and spread across ....no matter whether its body, soul or your beautiful words. Loved it .

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I love what you said here Avinash, so true, thanks so much. :-)
Niiiiiiccccccccceeee! An inseparable union.... one more faithful, than even a dog and master....
And again...! We travel.
It is like breath, in those moments- essential!
Thanks for this Frieda.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Terry!
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Exhaling poetry sometimes has no rhyme or reason, but it always glides along the dance floor of our thoughts and waltzes across our hearts, passion leading with every step.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille ron....
ron

10 Years Ago

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You exhale poetry and we inhale its beauty and wonder. No telling what surprises may come from the mind vortexes. Anyway we call it art. Written or spoken form...Great...:)..........

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Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Smart woman...:)..........................
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Not always, but perceptive. ;-) haha
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

:)................................
I was just remarking in another review how one of the hardest things a poet can do is to describe what we do and what we are..... you got it dead on! Excellent! :)

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Woo, thanks so much Raymond, muchly appreciated :-)
Frieda, This is beautiful. From the first lines. "My ink bleeds unto the page
wandering from the mind's vortex", I pictured the brain bleeding these words, flowing through your arm, through your fingers and out through your pen. Reading further, I realized the bleeding comes from the soul. That is how your art pours out of you.


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Damien, good to see you again, jazz'd you enjoy'd, I need to visit you soon my friend.. read more
You always weave a splendid cloth.
Your Muse has sought to being your pen a flowing of art.
And again..once finished..it starts all over again.
Very nice.
Scott

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

That's Scott always appreciate your kind words....
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott.......
I'm at a loss for words. This is so beautiful.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I'll take that as a huge compliment Brittany, whenever I'm render'd speechless by a piece, to me, th.. read more
Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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