~and then once again, Exhale Poetry

My ink bleeds onto the page

        wandering from the mind's vortex 

  spiral twisters, compulsions 

                      and desires  

  wafting through rambling quills

     hearts devour'd & core exposed

        unstrung melodies of spirit's zest,

         flutters of gossamer wings on zephyr'

s glide

            touching moments unravel'd,

                  nature running poppy wild

               ...and then once again, 

  ~EXHALE POETRY~

start

    the 

          process

                over

                      again

  from the top one more time

    gliding on a dance floor

           of rhythmic seduction

             is it rhyme or reason

                 that keeps me coming back to you

Author's Note

Reviews

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Hi, I wonder how a conversation with you would go down for I believe you speak poetry throughout. I'm reading your work and I just see this poetess who sleeps, eats and breathes poetry. I'm amazed and in awe of your ability and your work. "flutters of gossamer wings on zephyr's glide
touching moments unravel'd," The silky sway to the rhythm. I can see the class of lady and the passion she embeds in her way of life. Wow, I need to Exhale, taking this all in, such a monumental amount of passion, I loved it.

[Frieda P]

Sweet thing to say but hardly, if I spoke this way every day I'm sure they'd lock me away for sure. Thanks so much :-)

[Rita L. Sev]

Is it rhyme or reason... the million dollar question, which needs no answer, for we'd still keep coming back anyway... You exhale, and sweet music sounds across the pages of the WC, Frieda.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Gives you a different sort of a high...doesn't it?

[Frieda P]

Indeed it does, thanks so much.

[Eden Falls]

You have quite a way of writing.

Taste in music too, interesting.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for dropping in and your review Eden, muchly appreciated.

[Tai Ryens]

Ink bleeding onto the page, seeming to direct your imagination as if it were sentient and capable of thoughts of its own, stringing together lines that you would have not thought of had you not that quill . . . This process could be truly meticulous or ecstatic, depending on the person doing so . . . Well done, I enjoyed this.

[Frieda P]

I think that just might be so Tai, thanks so much for your thoughts.

[gabrielle]

is it rhyme or reason
that keeps me coming back to you ---i truly love how you end this. The idea in this piece reminded me of hypergraphia. Always stunning write, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Ha gabrielle thanks, I think I've got it, and luckily there is no cure. :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Another stunning write Frieda. Beautiful. :) :D

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Kazie :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome. :) :D

[Pryde Foltz]

~EXHALE POETRY~

start
the
process
over
again

from the top one more time
gliding on a dance floor
of rhythmic seduction
is it rhyme or reason
that keeps me coming back to you

I think that is love. Awesome write.

[Frieda P]

I think you're write on Pryde, thanks muchly.

[Cassie]

It is reason that keeps you coming back, do not close your account again all else my pen will get dry coz as you know, you are my teacher and to get better i have to keep reading you....aha!!! so it is reason, and I am the reason. I like the beginning of it, my pen bleeds....

[Frieda P]

Awh you're too sweet Cassie, no wonder Jack calls you sunshine....thanks so much for your kind words, you humble me my friend.

[Shaquana Adams]

~EXHALE POETRY~

start
the
process
over
again

from the top one more time
gliding on a dance floor.

I love this. Very nicely penned! I can definitely relate!

[Frieda P]

Thanks again Shaquana, thrilled you enjoyed this one!