~~Fluttery Felicitous Bliss

~~Fluttery Felicitous Bliss

A Poem by Frieda P
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Collaborative butterfly musings ~ Jack & Frieda

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Dreamy rush of butterflies surrender my lucidity
a'stray in the essence of fluttering felicitous bliss
my spirit soars to apperception's heights
envelop'd in a surreal fantasia of flight
 
Rainbow whisperings illumine my emotions
feathering the edges of flesh-tone fingers
slowly upon tingl’d thighs in shadowed sighs
emblazon into a firework’s frenzy
 
Apricot dew and flowery sun-kissed etchings
I languish in the floating billow of clouds
wishes come true in the moment of release
blushing my cheeks and tempting my spirit
 
Lilacs form on halluncine’d reflections
prismatic streams a’wash upon painted pastel eyelids
quivering breathless within heart spiraled desires
 singing melodically the sparkl’d radiance of your song
 

© 2014 Frieda P


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It's surreal. the use of color and the flicker of movement with the hands, the shivering, the thighs, and moreover reality paint a picture of coming between two worlds. one painted brightly in colors, and butterfly movement, and another in the present. It sort of brings to mind moments that we experience now and can't believe. It makes me feel, like I walked into one of those abstract paintings, where you have a distinct figure dressed decadently in pastel and metallic gems. it really does have a nostalgic feel.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

What a stunning review songstress, I love where this took you, I'm looking at our collaboration in a.. read more
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Songstress. But the true beauty of this piece is the poet who's page it is fe.. read more



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Quite the team...another great colab..!!
A painting of delightful words and message.
Kudos to the dynamic duo...

Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jack...

10 Years Ago

Just call me Robin...thanks so much.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Oh woo, I get to drive the Batmobile so, holy batshyte. ;-)
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

Bats...now that seems appropriate.....
Lilacs, apricots and sunshine sound magical right now. Well...you know how I feel about rainbows. Another lovely poem from you, couldn't help but think of love and spring.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Anne, jazz'd our collaboration put in a spring/love state of mind. :-)
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Anne. If our poem helped you smile, then I know I can speak for Frieda when I.. read more
Lilacs form on halluncine’d reflections
prismatic streams a’wash upon painted pastel eyelids
quivering breathless within heart spiraled desires
singing melodically the sparkl’d radiance of your song

Enchanting word play, Frieda.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

That's Jack stanza Pryde, I enjoy'd that one too, thanks so much.
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Pryde.
I imagine that the re admirals are bowing to you both tonight, well done, great read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Thomas.
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Thomas. She is amazing, isn't she?
Enchanting Poetry packed with beautiful visions and dreams...made me sigh...
And unbeknown to me, my heart reached out for some of that bliss...
You are great Frieda.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Divya, I have Jack to thank also, so thrilled you enjoy'd our collaboration my friend.
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much Divya for visiting our poem today and leaving such kind words.
AYVID N

10 Years Ago

You are welcome Jack. It was a delightful read from you and Frieda.
Truly a picture painted with words. Very nice you two. :)
100 visions of a lovesick Mothra

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha 'lovesick Mothra' you're a character Raymond ;-) Thanks muchly...
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Funny I said these words as I wrote them, but the voice was off from my mouth movements...what's up .. read more
Rainbow whisperings illumine my emotions
feathering the edges of flesh-tone fingers
slowly upon tingl’d thighs in shadowed sighs
emblazon into a firework’s frenzy.

Simply beautiful Frieda! :) Great work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ah I love that too, the credit goes to Jack though, we collaborated on this one, jazz'd you enjoyed .. read more
Shaquana Adams

10 Years Ago

:)..........
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thank you Shaquana, but all of the credit goes to Frieda, she is such an inspiration to me.
this is a beautiful and romantic piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks KL, glad you enjoyed our collaboration.
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much my friend.
Frieda, this is so very sweet and passionate. Being someone that isn't her continuously I see in snapshots and you have developed into a poet that has reached beautiful heights. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I'm speechless Revery, I can't take all the credit though, this was a collaboration with Jack, thank.. read more
Revery

10 Years Ago

I believe that, Jack is a good man and great poet. Well congratulations to you and Jack.
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so very much my friend. But all of the credit goes to Frieda. She is such an inspiration to m.. read more
You forgot to use the word zephyr.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You're such a pill Mark, it's coming up............
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Hey Frieda, can I borrow your brush. I just blew in here on a zephyr and my hair is a mess. Oh hey M.. read more
Mark

10 Years Ago

drive by zephyr'd I am :P

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