~~Fluttery Felicitous Bliss

Collaborative butterfly musings ~ Jack & Frieda

Dreamy rush of butterflies surrender my lucidity

a'stray in the essence of fluttering felicitous bliss

my spirit soars to apperception's heights

envelop'd in a surreal fantasia of flight

 

Rainbow whisperings illumine my emotions

feathering the edges of flesh-tone fingers

slowly upon tingl’d thighs in shadowed sighs

emblazon into a firework’s frenzy

 

Apricot dew and flowery sun-kissed etchings

I languish in the floating billow of clouds

wishes come true in the moment of release

blushing my cheeks and tempting my spirit

 

Lilacs form on halluncine’d reflections

prismatic streams a’wash upon painted pastel eyelids

quivering breathless within heart spiraled desires

 singing melodically the sparkl’d radiance of your song

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[songstress]

It's surreal. the use of color and the flicker of movement with the hands, the shivering, the thighs, and moreover reality paint a picture of coming between two worlds. one painted brightly in colors, and butterfly movement, and another in the present. It sort of brings to mind moments that we experience now and can't believe. It makes me feel, like I walked into one of those abstract paintings, where you have a distinct figure dressed decadently in pastel and metallic gems. it really does have a nostalgic feel.

[Frieda P]

What a stunning review songstress, I love where this took you, I'm looking at our collaboration in a whole new light, thanks so much my friend.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Songstress. But the true beauty of this piece is the poet who's page it is featured on. Frieda is an amazing poet.

[Scott Metro]

Quite the team...another great colab..!!
A painting of delightful words and message.
Kudos to the dynamic duo...

Scott

[Frieda P]

Ahh 'dynamic duo' I'm liking that a lot, thanks so much Scott.

[Scott Metro]

.....always.....

[Jack...]

Just call me Robin...thanks so much.

[Frieda P]

Oh woo, I get to drive the Batmobile so, holy batshyte. ;-)

[Scott Metro]

Bats...now that seems appropriate.....

[icelandicblue]

Lilacs, apricots and sunshine sound magical right now. Well...you know how I feel about rainbows. Another lovely poem from you, couldn't help but think of love and spring.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Anne, jazz'd our collaboration put in a spring/love state of mind. :-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Anne. If our poem helped you smile, then I know I can speak for Frieda when I say, we are both smiling.

[Pryde Foltz]

Lilacs form on halluncine’d reflections
prismatic streams a’wash upon painted pastel eyelids
quivering breathless within heart spiraled desires
singing melodically the sparkl’d radiance of your song

Enchanting word play, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

That's Jack stanza Pryde, I enjoy'd that one too, thanks so much.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Pryde.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I imagine that the re admirals are bowing to you both tonight, well done, great read.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Thomas.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Thomas. She is amazing, isn't she?

[Ayvid N]

Enchanting Poetry packed with beautiful visions and dreams...made me sigh...
And unbeknown to me, my heart reached out for some of that bliss...
You are great Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Divya, I have Jack to thank also, so thrilled you enjoy'd our collaboration my friend.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Divya for visiting our poem today and leaving such kind words.

[Ayvid N]

You are welcome Jack. It was a delightful read from you and Frieda.

[Raymond Federle]

Truly a picture painted with words. Very nice you two. :)
100 visions of a lovesick Mothra

[Frieda P]

Ha 'lovesick Mothra' you're a character Raymond ;-) Thanks muchly...

[Jack...]

Funny I said these words as I wrote them, but the voice was off from my mouth movements...what's up with that? Thanks so much Raymond. Frieda is an amazing poet to write with.

[Shaquana Adams]

Rainbow whisperings illumine my emotions
feathering the edges of flesh-tone fingers
slowly upon tingl’d thighs in shadowed sighs
emblazon into a firework’s frenzy.

Simply beautiful Frieda! :) Great work.

[Frieda P]

Ah I love that too, the credit goes to Jack though, we collaborated on this one, jazz'd you enjoyed Shaquana.

[Shaquana Adams]

:)..........

[Jack...]

Thank you Shaquana, but all of the credit goes to Frieda, she is such an inspiration to me.

[Lyn Anderson]

this is a beautiful and romantic piece.

[Frieda P]

Thanks KL, glad you enjoyed our collaboration.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend.

[Revery]

Frieda, this is so very sweet and passionate. Being someone that isn't her continuously I see in snapshots and you have developed into a poet that has reached beautiful heights. Thanks for sharing.

[Frieda P]

I'm speechless Revery, I can't take all the credit though, this was a collaboration with Jack, thank so much, glad you peeked in.

[Revery]

I believe that, Jack is a good man and great poet. Well congratulations to you and Jack.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend. But all of the credit goes to Frieda. She is such an inspiration to me.

[Mark]

You forgot to use the word zephyr.

[Frieda P]

You're such a pill Mark, it's coming up............

[Jack...]

Hey Frieda, can I borrow your brush. I just blew in here on a zephyr and my hair is a mess. Oh hey Mark, I didn't see you there. Thanks for stopping by.

[Mark]

drive by zephyr'd I am :P