It's surreal. the use of color and the flicker of movement with the hands, the shivering, the thighs, and moreover reality paint a picture of coming between two worlds. one painted brightly in colors, and butterfly movement, and another in the present. It sort of brings to mind moments that we experience now and can't believe. It makes me feel, like I walked into one of those abstract paintings, where you have a distinct figure dressed decadently in pastel and metallic gems. it really does have a nostalgic feel.
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10 Years Ago
What a stunning review songstress, I love where this took you, I'm looking at our collaboration in a.. read moreWhat a stunning review songstress, I love where this took you, I'm looking at our collaboration in a whole new light, thanks so much my friend.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so very much Songstress. But the true beauty of this piece is the poet who's page it is fe.. read moreThank you so very much Songstress. But the true beauty of this piece is the poet who's page it is featured on. Frieda is an amazing poet.
I can definitely hear your voice and Jack's voice in this piece.
Anything you write in collaboration is seemingly done with ease.
(I didn't mean to rhyme. Haha.)
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10 Years Ago
Ha that's about the only time I rhyme, when it comes out purely by accident, thanks Arzel, glad you .. read moreHa that's about the only time I rhyme, when it comes out purely by accident, thanks Arzel, glad you enjoyed. :-)
10 Years Ago
Thanks so much my friend. Happy you enjoyed our poetic project.
When I read a collaboration by Frieda and Jack, I am reminded of artist's brushstrokes, each line supporting a masterpiece. Bliss... is a good word for this poem.
Hi, I'll start by saying the font and image is really beautiful accompanied by such a sweet innocent sound.
So pure and touching are the words, they embrace the reader like some wind kisses on cheeks, I could feel the love and heart in each line. Some people make lust and passion seem so cheap and degrading.. This is the complete opposite, you make it feel like heaven. I could soar in cloud filled skies, dreaming away night after night to such touching poetry. Great collaboration
'embrace the reader like some wind kisses on the cheeks'...that's poetry right there, thanks so much.. read more'embrace the reader like some wind kisses on the cheeks'...that's poetry right there, thanks so much BCE, so thrilled you enjoyed.
10 Years Ago
Enjoyed and inspired, I rarely write about love and happiness for I fall short of such brilliance as.. read moreEnjoyed and inspired, I rarely write about love and happiness for I fall short of such brilliance as this piece but when I do I would hope it's half as good as this.
10 Years Ago
Believe me I'm not always feeling so fluttery myself, thanks again my friend, so kind of you to say.
Oh my goodness. I felt like I was in a completely different place when I read this...Wow. This was so good. And music in the background, that's so neat. Is that you singing? That is so pretty. Great job with this :)
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10 Years Ago
What a sweet response Maggie, thanks so much, and no haha, I have the worst voice in the world...ton.. read moreWhat a sweet response Maggie, thanks so much, and no haha, I have the worst voice in the world...tone deaf I think. :-)
10 Years Ago
Hahaha! I understand:) And you are so welcome! It was very good. (:
Love it, Frieda! It has this surreal-ness to it that just draws one in and refuse to let them leave. Excellent work!
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10 Years Ago
Thanks so much Katherine, the talented romance poet Jack gets credit for this collaboration coming t.. read moreThanks so much Katherine, the talented romance poet Jack gets credit for this collaboration coming to fruition too, so glad you enjoy'd!
It's surreal. the use of color and the flicker of movement with the hands, the shivering, the thighs, and moreover reality paint a picture of coming between two worlds. one painted brightly in colors, and butterfly movement, and another in the present. It sort of brings to mind moments that we experience now and can't believe. It makes me feel, like I walked into one of those abstract paintings, where you have a distinct figure dressed decadently in pastel and metallic gems. it really does have a nostalgic feel.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
What a stunning review songstress, I love where this took you, I'm looking at our collaboration in a.. read moreWhat a stunning review songstress, I love where this took you, I'm looking at our collaboration in a whole new light, thanks so much my friend.
10 Years Ago
Thank you so very much Songstress. But the true beauty of this piece is the poet who's page it is fe.. read moreThank you so very much Songstress. But the true beauty of this piece is the poet who's page it is featured on. Frieda is an amazing poet.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..