~~Fluttery Felicitous Bliss

Collaborative butterfly musings ~ Jack & Frieda

Dreamy rush of butterflies surrender my lucidity

a'stray in the essence of fluttering felicitous bliss

my spirit soars to apperception's heights

envelop'd in a surreal fantasia of flight

 

Rainbow whisperings illumine my emotions

feathering the edges of flesh-tone fingers

slowly upon tingl’d thighs in shadowed sighs

emblazon into a firework’s frenzy

 

Apricot dew and flowery sun-kissed etchings

I languish in the floating billow of clouds

wishes come true in the moment of release

blushing my cheeks and tempting my spirit

 

Lilacs form on halluncine’d reflections

prismatic streams a’wash upon painted pastel eyelids

quivering breathless within heart spiraled desires

 singing melodically the sparkl’d radiance of your song

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[songstress]

It's surreal. the use of color and the flicker of movement with the hands, the shivering, the thighs, and moreover reality paint a picture of coming between two worlds. one painted brightly in colors, and butterfly movement, and another in the present. It sort of brings to mind moments that we experience now and can't believe. It makes me feel, like I walked into one of those abstract paintings, where you have a distinct figure dressed decadently in pastel and metallic gems. it really does have a nostalgic feel.

[Frieda P]

What a stunning review songstress, I love where this took you, I'm looking at our collaboration in a whole new light, thanks so much my friend.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Songstress. But the true beauty of this piece is the poet who's page it is featured on. Frieda is an amazing poet.

[child of God]

Hmm this is a beautiful. Writ. Thank you for pending I enjoyed. This read

[Latifa]

aah this is sooo beautiful I love it

[Frieda P]

Thanks Latifa, glad you enjoyed our collaboration.

[Giggling Star]

Lovely images and feelings here Frieda. Enjoyed it very much, congrats to both of you!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[Giggling Star]

:) .......... Star

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille stargazer

[Blue]

I can definitely hear your voice and Jack's voice in this piece.
Anything you write in collaboration is seemingly done with ease.

(I didn't mean to rhyme. Haha.)

[Frieda P]

Ha that's about the only time I rhyme, when it comes out purely by accident, thanks Arzel, glad you enjoyed. :-)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much my friend. Happy you enjoyed our poetic project.

[Rita L. Sev]

When I read a collaboration by Frieda and Jack, I am reminded of artist's brushstrokes, each line supporting a masterpiece. Bliss... is a good word for this poem.

[Frieda P]

You're too kind Rita, thanks so much.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Rita. Frieda wields the brush...I just run out for sandwiches

[Frieda P]

Don't listen to a word he says Rita!

[Sue Hart]

Pretty, floral essence painting a lovely garden of words.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sue, glad you enjoyed.

[>.]

Hi, I'll start by saying the font and image is really beautiful accompanied by such a sweet innocent sound.
So pure and touching are the words, they embrace the reader like some wind kisses on cheeks, I could feel the love and heart in each line. Some people make lust and passion seem so cheap and degrading.. This is the complete opposite, you make it feel like heaven. I could soar in cloud filled skies, dreaming away night after night to such touching poetry. Great collaboration

[Frieda P]

'embrace the reader like some wind kisses on the cheeks'...that's poetry right there, thanks so much BCE, so thrilled you enjoyed.

[>.]

Enjoyed and inspired, I rarely write about love and happiness for I fall short of such brilliance as this piece but when I do I would hope it's half as good as this.

[Frieda P]

Believe me I'm not always feeling so fluttery myself, thanks again my friend, so kind of you to say.

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Oh my goodness. I felt like I was in a completely different place when I read this...Wow. This was so good. And music in the background, that's so neat. Is that you singing? That is so pretty. Great job with this :)

[Frieda P]

What a sweet response Maggie, thanks so much, and no haha, I have the worst voice in the world...tone deaf I think. :-)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Hahaha! I understand:) And you are so welcome! It was very good. (:

[Frieda P]

I dance like a maniac, but you wouldn't want to see that either ;-)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Hahaha I LOVE dancing!!! But yes, I don't dance in front of ANYONE!!XD

[❤ Maggie ❤]

Hahah!! I love dancing, but I'm afraid I'm awful at it! I don't dance in front of anyone!

[Katherine R.]

Love it, Frieda! It has this surreal-ness to it that just draws one in and refuse to let them leave. Excellent work!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Katherine, the talented romance poet Jack gets credit for this collaboration coming to fruition too, so glad you enjoy'd!

[Katherine R.]

Jack has talent. Seriously.

It was awesome!

[Frieda P]

Indeed he does, thanks again!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Katherine, but the talented one here is Frieda. I have learned so much from her.

[Katherine R.]

D: So who do I give credit too? You both say the same!

Well....ah! Excellent job, both of you!