Like a firefly~~

 Like a stunner firefly

       you twinkled my heart

  a'flutter in fluorescent glow,

      dazzling my high-flown smile

  blazing in your incandescent soul

      the flames of your effulgent spirit,

 scintillating glimmers within your zest

   night's explode in your warm luminescence

 setting fire's smoldering sparkle a'blaze, 

       floats me gingerly unto moonlight and back

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

Ah, the sights and sounds of a summer night filled with love and nature's tiny beacons. Warm breezes floating the scent of Jasmine, a nice bottle of wine, a slowly rising moon, being serenaded by crickets, soft lips, an affectionate embrace, touching, caressing, ahhhhhhh. Oh sorry, I guess I got carried off by your beautiful words tonight. I meant to say, another ravisnhingly wonderful piece from you my sweet friend.

[Frieda P]

Sheesh Jack, I like your review muchly better than my poem..............thanks! I think ;-) You are a true poet my friend, heart and soul.

[aspen]

i love the imagery that you portray here,truly beautiful writing

[Baby Ricochet]

Quite a lovely poem you wrote Frieda. Exceptional in fact.

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance Baby.

[justjenn_2u]

Magical and worthy. I love the bright light I feel in your descriptive stanzas. A good piece, worthy of recognition said in few lines.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much jenn, muchly appreciated...

[Brittany Zedalis]

I'm fangirling like crazy because of the gif you chose. I love that anime SO much. It's my favorite! Ok, enough fangirling. Back to the poem. You once again amaze me with your writing skill. I love this one. ^-^

[Frieda P]

I know, isn't it a great one, so jazz'd you enjoyed both Brittany!

[Brittany Zedalis]

It really is, if you're referring to the anime, haha. One of my best friends got me to watch it. Broke my heart a few times, but it's definitely my favorite.

[Frieda P]

This is the first time I've seen it, and it was begging to be written...

[Arthur Henn]

This reads like a beautiful ballad of lyric... Wonderful!

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words Arthur!

[Arthur Henn]

You are very welcome. Keep writing - Never Stop.

[Frieda P]

I can't, it's my therapy, if I go nutters you know what happened. ;-)

[Scott Metro]

Twinkled your heart.....
I just have to wonder who all these men are that you ladies write about...and where is the line..LOL
Another sparkling write.
floats me gingerly unto moonlight and back..that's a nice line...!!
Scott

[Frieda P]

Haha we make them up as we go along....you don't really think these perfect men exist, do ya? ;-)

[Scott Metro]

I was wondering..I wanted lessons on how to be the influence for one of these..sounds delicious.
read moreI was wondering..I wanted lessons on how to be the influence for one of these..sounds delicious.
Scott

[Frieda P]

You have to howl the loudest. ;-)

[Scott Metro]

AWWWWHOOOOOOOOOOOO AW AW AW AWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

[s y e]

// Like a stunner firefly
you twinkled my heart
a'flutter in fluorescent glow, //

Woweee, this is so utterly stunning Frieda - You practically blew me over to Jersey, ha. You took my breath away... I had to sit here and wait to get myself together. It's beautifully written and held alot of meaning.
Again, I am in heaven when I read you. My little safe haven as always.

Flip flops & all that jazz x

[Frieda P]

You're too sweet Sye, love 'safe haven', that blew my skirt up! Thanks so much luv xo

[s y e]

It is though. It's 'my' little safe haven, no one elses, got that? :-) xo

[Frieda P]

I just don't pay you enough sweet pea. ;-) xoxo

[s y e]

Just promise it's only mine? :-) xoxo