Colorless Indifference

COLLABORATION~ Jack & Frieda Lovely piano music compos'd by just Jack

bled out through your vain'd indifference

the taste of sulfurous poisons on my skin

glance'd a mocking blow in your inertia

lethargic in  sharing  gravy'd recompense

overcompensating in my own redemption

we all fall down in soil'd nonchalance  

toxic meanings frown on broken promises

puddles form at the feet of the weary

drinking in the essence of face forward moments

brandishing a sword of tolerant gilding

slicing downward at the head of the beast

missing the mark in blinded fury

dancing forlorn on an empty wire

wrapp'd around unwilling strides

vault'd stairway to Utopia's doors lock'd 

step into the lion's den unwithered

flowing out an execution's finish

flood of tainted claret cruor feel unto my toes

conviction bows to untrusting desires

never again to weep salt’d tears

stain’d glory amiss in hollow parched lips

and fire brand’d breaths aiming

armor plate and rusted dreams corrode

running from white light rabid stares…

Author's Note

Reviews

[s y e]

It's has gotten to the point where I just don't know who beings and who ends... You guys just fit together perfectly. Like a missing puzzle has been completed when you two collaborate together, it makes my night and leaves me sighing and smiling.

// toxic meanings frown on broken promises
puddles form at the feet of the weary
drinking in the essence of face forward moments //

This is beautiful. My two favourite people, please don't ever stop writing together. You will soon be able to make a book out of these beautiful writes and I'll be the first one to buy it! Haha. :-))

And Jack, like I told you just now, that recording is simply amazing! You blew me off my feet.

The imagery is so vivid and beautiful.

Flop flops & all that jazz!

[Frieda P]

Thrilled you enjoyed this one noodlebumble...I'm partial to it myself, didn't Jack do a wonderful job on the music, fits perfectly with the sentiment, thanks luv! xo

[s y e]

He is one special, talented man. :) It blew me away. x

[Sami Khalil]

The title , the poem , the piano are all great. So many great lines to touch upon...I love your collaborations...:)....................

[Frieda P]

Doing the happy dance, grazie mille Sami! :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Happy , happy , happy like the man on Duck Dynasty says...You are welcome...:)...................

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Sami. But Frieda is the sweet music on this team.

[Sami Khalil]

So true ...You are welcome muchly...:)................