_Sour Grapes_
A Poem by
Frieda P
~an age'd whine
I should have seen you coming
fine wine of the worst kind,
missed all the clues in your roving eye
your demeanor won me over
confidence up the wazoo
now I'm wondering
what the f**k was I thinking
with the likes of your kind,
bought me pretty posies
that just wasn't enough
thought I'd beat the odds
so did all those other women
who took a chance at gambling
with their hearts and souls
left a sour taste in my mouth
to accompany my age'd whine
© 2014 Frieda P
Author's Note
Reviews
You can whine all you want after drinking that leftover wine! Unfortunately, a leopard rarely changes his spots, but we always hope for the best and let our hearts rule our brains. Very well written, Frieda. Lydi**
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I was whinging full throttle that day...ha, thanks Lydikey.
Ah, I think I have read something like this in this page before. Do we really learn...or we are just too kind to give chances after all?
Nice metaphor, Frieda.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ah, I think I have read something like this in this page before. Do we really learn...or we are just too kind to give chances after all?
Nice metaphor, Frieda.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Haha, probably so Dhaye, I'm president of the I never learn club....thanks muchly. ;-)
11 Years Ago
Congratulations. Hehe. You're welcome. =)
11 Years Ago
Yeah, I'm so freaking lucky haha ;-)
hehehe.....what the f**k were you thinking?
Posted 11 Years Ago
hehehe.....what the fuck were you thinking?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
LOL...who the f**k knows? hahaha
Beware the charmer bearing wine and posies... but those first sips are so sweet, aren't they?
Posted 11 Years Ago
Beware the charmer bearing wine and posies... but those first sips are so sweet, aren't they?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Sure are, but after a while you're supposed to learn no? Thanks Rita.
left a sour taste in my mouth
to accompany my age'd whine
But he is our teacher, Frieda LOL. Hey, watch that penguin video again and be the penguin and give the face plant.
Posted 11 Years Ago
left a sour taste in my mouth
to accompany my age'd whine
But he is our teacher, Frieda LOL. Hey, watch that penguin video again and be the penguin and give the face plant.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Ha, I'll do that Pryde!
It is essential to know who exactly someone is before loosening the cork on that bottle...wine can go bad so quickly.
Do I need to say amazing...yes, I have no choice...the truth reigns supreme.
Posted 11 Years Ago
It is essential to know who exactly someone is before loosening the cork on that bottle...wine can go bad so quickly.
Do I need to say amazing...yes, I have no choice...the truth reigns supreme.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Ha, now you tell me Jack, I became uncork'd too quickly evidently...thanks muchly my friend!
AMEN!! Been there ...done that and ive the blood stained t-shirt!! Sigh...
Posted 11 Years Ago
AMEN!! Been there ...done that and ive the blood stained t-shirt!! Sigh...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I'm sure we're not the only ones, what's up with us silly women and bad boys?!
11 Years Ago
Thats too long to explain here!! Haha..
11 Years Ago
Ha was rhetorical anywho....hahaa, I don't wanna know. ;-P
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Frieda P NJ
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll..
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