Amber'd Reminisces

In dark amber twilight recesses

     folded over and safely tuck'd

memories mull like sweet dandelion's tangy

 

wine

          of burgundy'd evenings bliss

    spice of nectar'd afternoons

            morning's satiated stares

I beckon these recollections

    on tempestuous 

rainy days raging such as this,

        reminiscing when we danc'd 'tween raindrops

Author's Note

Painting~KISS AFTER RAIN - by Leonidafremov

Reviews

[Dhaye]

Wow! I'm so behind reviews, Frieda. Glad I have this in my list. This is so beautiful. It's so obvious I'm so fascinated with any piece with the concept of rain. And I love the music, too. I'm going to download it for my own copy (the you tube music video) so thank you so much for the share. No wonder you got high rating here.
Bravo!

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks so much Dhaye, so glad you enjoy'd this one, rain does seem to inspire!

[Dhaye]

You're so much welcome, Frieda. Always smile! =)

[PP]

Beauty with every bite of this piece..x

[Frieda P]

You're too sweet Tink, thanks muchly my friend. x

[Jack...]

Indeed. our minds are painted with beautiful memories, love, that touch, a delicious kiss found somewhere in our past. Dancing between the raindrops to the beat of a heart, following long ago footsteps in patteren'd embrace along the corridor...memories, beautiful memories, but none as beautiful as your poem today my sweet friend. Rough nights find mornings worth waking up for when it is your poetry that waits. Stunning my amazing poet...no one better.

[Frieda P]

Always love your poetic responses Jack, thanks so much my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

Dancing between the rainbows: Now that is a brilliant concept and has many meanings. I noticed you are writing shorter poems but still the same power of other aspects...Splendid as usual...:)............

[Frieda P]

Hmmm, so it has, I guess I figured out how to say it without flapping my pen incessantly, thanks so much Sami. ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...You are welcome...:).............................

[Scott Metro]

Dancing between raindrops...pretty darn romantic.
Thoughts of yesterday.
How sweet you write..
Admiration always Frieda..
Scott

[Frieda P]

Thanks Scott, drunken skies will do it every time. ;-)

[Scott Metro]

My pleasure...always enjoy reading you !!!!!!!!
Scotty Wolf

[Frieda P]

Woo, dancin' tween raindrops !!

[Scott Metro]

But...those shoes..my my my...LOL

[Rachelle]

Experiences flavored with emotions make memories...

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille sweetbind.

[NeiL ArandA]

Ah...I get the first bite on this newly compose piece Ms Frieda ... Old Photographs and Timeless Memories freeze on those little square papers . There's a song by Jim Croce which reminded me of this piece .

" Photographs And Memories"

Photographs and memories
Christmas cards you sent to me
All that I have are these to remember you
Memories that come at night
Take me to another time
Back to a happier day, when I called you mine

But we sure had a good time
When we started way back when
Morning walks and bedroom talks
Oh, how I loved you then

Summer skies and lullabies
Nights we couldn't say goodbye
And of all of the things that we knew
Not a dream survived

Photographs and memories
All the love you gave to me
Somehow it just can't be true
It's all I've left of you

[Frieda P]

What a sweet thought, I love that song by the way, thanks so much Neil!