Amber'd Reminisces

In dark amber twilight recesses

     folded over and safely tuck'd

memories mull like sweet dandelion's tangy

 

wine

          of burgundy'd evenings bliss

    spice of nectar'd afternoons

            morning's satiated stares

I beckon these recollections

    on tempestuous 

rainy days raging such as this,

        reminiscing when we danc'd 'tween raindrops

Author's Note

Painting~KISS AFTER RAIN - by Leonidafremov

Reviews

[Dhaye]

Wow! I'm so behind reviews, Frieda. Glad I have this in my list. This is so beautiful. It's so obvious I'm so fascinated with any piece with the concept of rain. And I love the music, too. I'm going to download it for my own copy (the you tube music video) so thank you so much for the share. No wonder you got high rating here.
Bravo!

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks so much Dhaye, so glad you enjoy'd this one, rain does seem to inspire!

[Dhaye]

You're so much welcome, Frieda. Always smile! =)

[Mark]

Sweets from the sweet. A tender poem.

[Frieda P]

Awh thanks Mark, why are you being so nice to me? haha ;-)

[Mark]

Because I love you of course. Same reason I tease you or criticize you. ;)

[Frieda P]

Awh.........now you're gonna force me to be nice back haha ;-)

[Mark]

Oh God don't do something out of character for *my* sake!

[Avinash]

Remnants of a beautiful affair..sweet memories still in air not just in mind ... :)

[Frieda P]

Exactly, thanks so much Avinash. :-)

[m.s.early]

Another beautiful piece I've come to expect. Your elegance knows no limit and your flow is as gentle as a tender kiss. Forest nymphs are jealous of your awareness of nature.

[Frieda P]

What an utterly charming review, thanks so much xavier.

[Rita L. Sev]

I beckon these recollections
on tempestuous rainy days raging such as this,
reminiscing when we danc'd 'tween raindrops

A truly beautiful piece of romance; nature bows to your pen, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

You're too kind Rita, thank you.

[Lyn Anderson]

As always a beautiful flowing romantic right, well done, well placed imagery.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille KL.

[Raymond Federle]

Homage to"Dandelion Wine" by Ray Bradbury maybe? Well done as always Frieda. :)

[Frieda P]

Never thought of that actually, that's one line I changed a few times, had differnt wines, settled on dandelion, thanks Raymond.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

You are the Enchanted Queen

[Frieda P]

Awh you're too sweet kiddo, thanks muchly.

[Giggling Star]

Ahhhhh....memories of beautiful moments. Frieda, you have such a talent... and I love your sense of humor (just a side note!)

[Frieda P]

Thanks on both counts stargazer! Muchly appreciated.

[Giggling Star]

You're up early - quiet Sunday morn? Bless you Frieda - keep laughing!

[Frieda P]

I'm not a very good sleeper, besides I love this time of morning...yes, will do, you too! :-D

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the way you finely tune the phrases with missing syllables to ensure the flow. Technically a very accomplished poem with a good content too.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Leslie, glad you enjoyed this one.

[SAYED THANGAL]

the image and imagery in the poem enforce the richness , good work

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sayed.