Amber'd Reminisces

In dark amber twilight recesses

     folded over and safely tuck'd

memories mull like sweet dandelion's tangy

 

wine

          of burgundy'd evenings bliss

    spice of nectar'd afternoons

            morning's satiated stares

I beckon these recollections

    on tempestuous 

rainy days raging such as this,

        reminiscing when we danc'd 'tween raindrops

Author's Note

Painting~KISS AFTER RAIN - by Leonidafremov

Reviews

[Dhaye]

Wow! I'm so behind reviews, Frieda. Glad I have this in my list. This is so beautiful. It's so obvious I'm so fascinated with any piece with the concept of rain. And I love the music, too. I'm going to download it for my own copy (the you tube music video) so thank you so much for the share. No wonder you got high rating here.
Bravo!

[Frieda P]

Oh thanks so much Dhaye, so glad you enjoy'd this one, rain does seem to inspire!

[Dhaye]

You're so much welcome, Frieda. Always smile! =)

[外人 (Gaiji..]

That's a jewel, a beautiful crystal, so delicate, so perfect. I particularly loved the vocabolary choices. So wisely chosen :) Keep writing !

[Vidya Bacchus]

I would love to dance between the raindrops.But sadly two left feet here lol.Lovely Freida:)

[Frieda P]

I'm pretty sure you don't need your feet for this dance hahah ;-) Thanks......

[Vidya Bacchus]

In that case I'm good to go.I much love this particular duet lol.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Beautiful and incredibly sad to read, one for my library I think!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Thomas, sorry for the late reply.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Perfect ending to such a smoothly enchanting write.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Travis.

[Redboy]

short n' sweet ; ) i like that.

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you did, thanks :-)

[Baby Ricochet]

What a lovely poem. Good one Frieda

[Frieda P]

Why thank you Baby....

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

I love this and the video you included!
Sweet short poem with a lot of feeling inside it.
Rain makes me melancholy and sometimes sad, or times it makes me feel peace.
It creates a mood.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Josie, I thought it was the perfect video too, glad you enjoyed....

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome, Frieda.

[WILDERNESS]

lovely, if life was only that and nothing else................... beautiful poem

[Frieda P]

If only, thanks Wilderness................

[Tai Ryens]

I take the references to rain as an indication towards memories attached with a faint moroseness, and the person has either endured many miseries with you or is the cause of said misery . . . Well done, this one is etched with many emotions and you portray them well.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Tai, jazz'd you enjoyed this one...it's a favorite of mine.