_nothing to wear

Knee deep in words and nothing to wear

my mind's closeted vault is overrun,
I donn'd a few petty metaphors but they had tears
a simile wrapped around my neck made me choke
wing tip'd stiletto verbiage on my painted toes
and proper paisley poesy adjectives in my hair,
still not ready to go out on the cafe
if I only knew where I left that damn'd silken sonnet
     sigh  oh brother, another night of naked poetry...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

No, no, no, this will never do. You are getting married tomorrow, remember? Find that box of chantilly lace adjectives and throw in some sensual syntax and get the show on the road, Frieda! :) The metaphor here is absolutely brilliant. Loved it. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Ha and where is everyone, I'm waiting!! Thanks Lydikey.

[Lydia Shutter]

Vinnie had his friend Pauly pay off the limo driver and now they are fighting about who is gonna pick you up! LOL

[Frieda P]

HAHA oh it figures...that damn Vinnie, I knew he'd screw it up!

[Lydia Shutter]

Yea, he has lotsa class, most of it low! LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha exactly, that's why I broke up with his arse.......LOL

[Lydia Shutter]

ROFL thanks for the laughs, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

If you happen to curt, move his tushy right along, will ya?

[Lydia Shutter]

:) he is probably headed for the border right now.......the cad! :)

[Frieda P]

LMAO...I'll catch up with him, he'll be sorry...........

[Raymond Federle]

Wonderfully done! ....and it's never to early for wine. Just add a slice of orange for breakfast! :)

[Frieda P]

Hahaha why didn't I think of that? ;-)

[Kylie]

Lol! Problem solved. Champers anyone? (;

[Frieda P]

Pour me another, cheers! :-)

[Kylie]

Cheers, guys and dolls!

[Cassie]

This one sounds nothing like naked poetry. i enjoyed reading and I like this line I only knew where I left that damn'd silken sonnet"

[Frieda P]

Ha good thing I put my shirt on then before I got here, thanks for your sunshine Cassie :-)

[Kylie]

How about Naked Poetry with a lovely glass of Wine (; Ha!
That's how I love my nights, lol!

[Frieda P]

Too early for wine, even for moi, share a cuppa though, thanks Kylie ha ;-)

[Kylie]

Lol, I meant tonight. (;

[Frieda P]

Ahh indeed Frieday night, we can still dance now though ;-)

[Kylie]

Ha! Partayy at mine. You supply the drinks. I got the music sorted. (;

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha you are hilarious my sweet,Naked poetry the best kind.Sometimes the words fly around in our heads helter skelter as yet not ready to be penned just driving us mad .I like this although since it is you there was never any doubt that I would :)

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, now I'm laughing, jazz'd you like my daftness, you must be a little bit crazy too!
read moreHahaha, now I'm laughing, jazz'd you like my daftness, you must be a little bit crazy too!

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Frieda P
Frieda P
NJ

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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[Vidya Bacchus]

Yeah let's say I am "just a little bit " crazy haha although I think that sentence falls a lot short lol.You know they cut off your comment at the knees haha.There is only half the comment who did you piss off haha

[Frieda P]

HA the list of who I didn't is shorter, wanna start there? LOL

[Vidya Bacchus]

That might be easier lol