Don't piss off the muse...

Madness rules the pen,
   freedom of speech
         not even a concept
what the muse says goes,
  just give in to the inky blows,
     dip that quill in bloody tears
  color it with apricot custard dawning's
    ravage erotica's blissful yearnings
       crack a rib on that funny bone
if you fight the urges,
   you'll end up on the chopping block
    writer's imagination arrested
don't piss off the muse, 
        

'tis  a woefully dreaded plight indeed...

Author's Note

'Angry Muse'~Argos Etchings & Paintings

Reviews

[emmajoy]

A mass of words is the writers' Mind Puppeteer . without IT we're empty, without it we're limp as a leaf in pain. You express what needs to be said, advice well given should be well used. You're the one, missus.

'.. dip that quill in bloody tears ~ color it with apricot custard dawning's ~ ravage erotica's blissful yearnings.. '

[Frieda P]

Lovin' mind puppeteer petulia, grazie mille my sweet friend....

[roarke]

sublime advice indeed. There's color in your writing like the color in a kaleidoscope.

[Frieda P]

Wow thanks roarke, I'm humbled by that statement, thanks so much.

[MsJewel]

I get it Frieda! Sometimes you just have to go where the muse takes you...or "poof" gone in a flash...

Love this cute little gem!

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Exactly, she's a pesky little critter, I've been poof'd a few times....ha, thanks Julie! :-)

[KeeD]

Lol Jack has a point there.. but damn this muse sounds interesting, I'd like to take a twirl at seeing sides of this muse and her extremes. This was mind shattering, bone crackling, so good.. had the terror instilled through her words, fear i must shut up now or the muse will think i'm weird.

[Frieda P]

Haha, seriously, don't blame me when your pen cracks Kee!

[KeeD]

No please, not my pen!

[Frieda P]

Ha should I have said your sword? LOL

[KeeD]

Lol okay neither yours, neither mine... let's just settle on dagger :P

[Frieda P]

Were you feeling pain? hahah

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Great write. :)

Whenever I'm alone that's when my muse starts talking to me.

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Nope, not alone, thanks Kaze :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome. :)

[Cassie]

Thank you for this great advise....you are teaching me differently today. ha!!

[Frieda P]

Ha, don't look at me, it's all the muse!

[writing mojo]

A musing how you lock into the autobiographical with inspiration as full view of the relapsing relative by release... "apricot custard dawning's" "ravage erotica's" Yes, I think I've seen and am aware of those visuals to phenolic congruency...excellent piece

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille mojo, always an interesting review from your pen my friend, muchly appreciated.

[Frieda P]

Ink from a heart of an artist, is unpredictable, always a surprise ... I piss off my muse so often, he hates me, and I him, but yet, I try to embrace him again, with all the balanced love I have... and play along ;) what a thought provoking brilliant piece my dear.... love it!

- Elisa

[Frieda P]

It most definitely is, I try to play nice with mine, but sometimes, they're just impossible! Thanks so much Eli, always love to read your thoughts Sis...! Love the new avatar cara....xo

They are! damn! mine is ignorant at the moment, he flies always away like an eagle, into the sky, lol, wrote about that even, it's such a task to hold him close ;) Thank you dear Sis. I love you, and come back for more soon, just have limited time urgh! xxxxxxxxxxxx you're the best!

[Frieda P]

I get it, being away it's a struggle catching up too, same here, will visit you soon again too, have the pasta ready ;-) haha Baci! xoxoxo

Ooooh I'm coming over in a minute, I can eat pasta in early mornings too like these, always hungry for good food ;) thanks love... yours always taste the best!!! :) baci love xoxoxox don't rush on my writings ok? take your time ♥

[Frieda P]

Me too, food, wine, good friends and poetry, what's better than that my friend? ;-) xoxo

Exactly love... with you I can spend a thousand or more hours!!! ♥ can't wait until you come to Europe again :D

[Frieda P]

Sigh, tomorrow I wish!!

Me too!!!! I need a time-machine!!!! back to the past this time ;)

[Frieda P]

How far back, I'll meet you in 1999, it was a very good year ;-)

Oooh now you say something... mia Tarentina :D:D ;-) Brindisina, Apuglia love.....

[Frieda P]

Finalmente, Alberobello mia sorella....... ;-D

Ma si... Alberobello... mangiamo le panzerotti presto!!! :) oh non vedo l'ora... ho fame haha

[Frieda P]

è una vergogna quando una donna olandese parla il migliore italiano che la donna italiana.......ma sì, mangiamo! ha, I have no clue if that's right, just let's eat, mangia, that much I do know!! xox

No, non ti preoccupare, non è una vergogna, lo sai, che mi fratelli Spagnoli qui on WC me imparanno Spagnolo migliore? allora... figurati ;) he he... Oh mangiamo testoro, ho troppo fame ora ... (drooling) haha... x

*vedi, imparano... ;)

[Frieda P]

Laughing here, I lost ya sis, all I know is that you're famished! Ha, let's eat ;-P xoxo

LOL, no worries, I always talk too much when you are giving me that chianti ;-) ha...... now let's eat lol :D:D

[Frieda P]

Haha, that homemade stuff will land you on your fine a*s ;-)

He he... oh Sis, I'm chuckling here big time.... ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Ain't that the truth. Like when I decided not to write about my time in the corps anymore and soon found out that was impossible.

[Frieda P]

Ha, exactly, the muse knows...........................

[redzone]

madness rules the pen.. yes, but in your hands the pen scripts and the muse nods, smiles and says, "listen up, Frieda wrote that line: "color it with apricot custard dawning" and I the great and wonderful muse, am jealous.. hmmmm, doesn't seem like you pissed her off Frieda... loved your poem.. ~~redzone

[Frieda P]

You don't get to see the vaulted ones or those that end up in the trash...ha, thanks curt, you're too kind my sweet friend.

[redzone]

my muse allows me no edits... er.. I mean... oh damn trashcan overflows... but I think it would be neat to wonder through that poetic trash....

[Frieda P]

Ha almost as frightening as wandering through my mind, scary shyte... ;-)

[redzone]

Frieda, hate to break this to you, but don't think your mind is scary shyte. Sorry!! You'll have to try harder ... ;0)

[Frieda P]

Take it from me, don't make me go all batshyte crazy on you now ;-P

[redzone]

Frieda, tsk tsk, bring it, but you will need an army!!! ;0p

[Frieda P]

haha tough one, new yawk and joisey....we all fall down ;-)

[Mark]

heh, I don't know if I've ever pissed off the muse but I've changed the words a lot. :P

[Frieda P]

That'll do it! I noticed when I start to change it, loses it's original essence, I always end up messing it up then....