~Suck it up, Buttercup...

Satire, perhaps. ;-)

Wafting on a dancing zephyr

posies unfurling under pressure

jazzing to the ubiquitous lines

butterfly wings all in a tizzy

of the darkly color'd stanzas

spectators a'ghast in convulsions

a'waiting on wildflowers destruction

apricot pits cringing in poetry's wake

eruptions of creativity's faux pas

desecrate a few of favor'd bliss

sojourning in fundamental blues

nothing left to be said

put the hurt on them,

 a tip from mon chéri pal....   

suck it up, buttercup !

Reviews

[Sarai Lee]

I love the playfulness of this! I also love the commentary of poetic fundamentals, and when to break the mold on them, toss out the rules and just dance right across the page however the hell you want to!
Your alliteration is fantastic in the lines "a'waiting on wildflowers destruction
apricot pits cringing in poetry's wake." I love it!

[Frieda P]

I had fun writing this one, ha...I doubt my intended target got it though...thanks jazz'd you enjoyed! ;-)

[icelandicblue]

LOL- Suck it up buttercup or we'll have to call the WAAAAAAmbulance! Thanks for a bit of encouragement one pant leg at a time.

[lee von cleef]

But their all in a Bunch !

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes I love it when people say crap like that to me. That is not something I say to anyone, except me!

[Frieda P]

ha good attitude sassy lady ;-)

[Brittany Zedalis]

Haha, that picture. xD Love it.

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks, glad you enjoyed my little rant...........

[MsJewel]

Well you told them girlfriend!
"Suck it up Buttercup!"
I love it!

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks Princess, almost as much fun as farting butterfies.... ;-)

[roarke]

this is poetic satire genius.

[Frieda P]

Ha thanks, when people tick me off, it comes out....

[Tom C]

Ha ha love it. Frieda P!!!!!

[Frieda P]

Ha glad you enjoyed Tom!!

[Lydia Shutter]

No Drama Mamas allowed....only feisty Joisey girls need apply! :) I liked the attitude in this one. Your poetry is always fresh and different. A pleasure to read. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you did Lydikey...thanks, the graphic you sent me, inspired part of it. ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Mmmmmm........yes rather cryptic satire unless I see the meaning on reflection my Lady. And a somewhat brutal piece of advice written in familiar metaphors.

[Frieda P]

Isn't satire usually cryptic, and glad you recognized the familiar John, thanks....