~Flourish

wrap me slowly in your bliss

         seize my breath to new heights

sway with me in melodic thunder

     enfold my delectation and make it soar

plant honey'd kisses all over my body

    i melt under the weight of your rush

 flowery flourish within our flush

         nectar's sweetness flowing

bend me like the wind ravish'd 

       my petals unfurl at your fever'd touch

dreamily a'waiting your rising dawn,

        surrendering in this dewdrop'd dance

Reviews

[Sarai Lee]

The imagery of a flower is strong here, coupled with the metaphors of intimacy and love. I think your word choice is wonderful. You really know how to bring out the gentle ebb and flow of tone. This has a kind of sing-song quality, which I think is lovely. Again, I love the elegance of the dropped "ed" to " 'd", which harkens back to the older romantic days of poetic verse. Thank you for sharing this!

[Frieda P]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thanks for your glowing review Sarai.

[Rachelle]

Forgive this pregnant woman but I am reminded of a cheesecake - luscious, delectable and positively sinful.... :). Ok. You have just made me want to bake....

[Frieda P]

More cheesecake........... ;-)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

I am noticing that you talk of dance a lot in your poetry.
The word reoccurs in your poetry...
Can you tell me the connection or why you use it frequently.
This is another splendid work of yours; a inspirational poem with touches of magic and flowing emotions.

[Frieda P]

I guess because I'm passionate about dancing, poetry and music, to me they're all related and fuel my spirit. Thanks so much Josie.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR THOUGHTS ON THIS~THEY ARE RELATED. DO YOU DANCE?

[Frieda P]

Never took lessons except adult jazz, but yes, like a crazy person! ;-)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

LOL~ ME, TOO! No lessons, but I love to make up my own and I love music, too! :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, that's what drives us and makes us poets too I think. :-)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Yea, maybe you are right. :)

[Rachelle]

Forgive this pregnant woman but I am reminded of a cheesecake - luscious, delectable and positively sinful.... :). Ok. You have just made me want to bake....

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, being pregnant three times, I soooo get it, thanks, save me a piece sweetbind.

[Ahena MK]

job well done..
:) 100/100

[Frieda P]

100 thanks Ahena :-)

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Your diction with respect to love poems is out of this world...every time I read I feel I am seeing visions...and going through everything that you write...I agree with Jack when he says that your work has an universal appeal...I now I wish you would tell me what you think my humble work...it would mean a lot to me!

[Frieda P]

Thank you kindly, and I will visit you soon....!

[Praveeta]

Truly sensational, Goddess of Love/Amazing Poet.

[Frieda P]

Awh, you're too sweet Praveeta, thanks so much.

[Praveeta]

You are most welcome talented poet.

[Solilokiss]

This song dances off the page, Frieda. I realise I said song because it feels like it was sung. Your descriptions and formatting. Here I go again, incapable of a neat response when the tongue is tied. It's just that this is Great. Flowery flourish within our flush. How fun it is to recite that line aloud! All of this, truly amazing. Well done, poet!

[Frieda P]

Wow Soliokiss, I"m doing the happy dance to your review! Thanks muchly...

[Cassie]

This one is like the breath of fresh air, such a lovely piece that feels welcoming, almost like you are breathing fresh morning air when it has rained, that smell of dust, very sensual piece, full of imagery. I loved this one.

[Frieda P]

So jazz'd you took it there Cassie, grazie mille my sweet friend.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Simply amazing. Great write.

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Kaze.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :)

[Mark]

There's both tenderness and hard almost violent action going on in this write. It's like looking into a trick mirror and seeing double images. You're either a genius or I'm seeing too much in it.

[Frieda P]

Violence, how so? See what happens when I don't add a zephyr, and it's all your fault! ;-P

[Mark]

Seize my breath, melodic thunder, bend me, fevered touch, surrender....

[Frieda P]

Hahaha you're not doing it right my man. ;-P

[Mark]

I didn't write this :p

[Frieda P]

Not write, right. hahaha

[Mark]

doing what right?

[Frieda P]

Nevermind, go take a shower hahah ;-P