~Flourish

wrap me slowly in your bliss

         seize my breath to new heights

sway with me in melodic thunder

     enfold my delectation and make it soar

plant honey'd kisses all over my body

    i melt under the weight of your rush

 flowery flourish within our flush

         nectar's sweetness flowing

bend me like the wind ravish'd 

       my petals unfurl at your fever'd touch

dreamily a'waiting your rising dawn,

        surrendering in this dewdrop'd dance

Reviews

[Sarai Lee]

The imagery of a flower is strong here, coupled with the metaphors of intimacy and love. I think your word choice is wonderful. You really know how to bring out the gentle ebb and flow of tone. This has a kind of sing-song quality, which I think is lovely. Again, I love the elegance of the dropped "ed" to " 'd", which harkens back to the older romantic days of poetic verse. Thank you for sharing this!

[Frieda P]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thanks for your glowing review Sarai.

[Lydia Shutter]

Fanning myself here....the passion and carnal desire throughout your poem is intense...yet it is elegant like the flower of your metaphor. Filled with eclat and pomp. Your poetry rocks, my friend. Lydi**

[Blue Ivory]

Ooooh this one is filled with passion! I like :D The picture is pretty intriguing too!

[Shaun Payton]

I love honey and flowers, good images and taste for poetry.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I adore being wrapped in bliss, well done, good read.

[Frieda P]

Indeed, I knew you would, thanks love. x

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing use of words and description. Take talent to create good thoughts and beautiful vision using words to make the imagination work. You did. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Ah you humble me dear poet, means a lot coming from you....thanks muchly Coyote.

[Rita L. Sev]

...flowery flourish within our flush... Now that's some smooth alliteration, Frieda. Your imagery dances with romance :)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille, jazz'd Rita...you know I love the dance ;-)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Frieda... it is a beautiful dance that you
can unfold the feelings of scstacy of melodic
thunder ... and melt under the weight of his rush.
The poem in its entirety is exquisite and a
masterpiece of pleasure. truly... Pat

[Frieda P]

You humble this poet Pat, thanks so much.

[Vidya Bacchus]

My kinda dance my lady Freida.Truly lovely I am in awe so I say "Awwwww" lol

[Frieda P]

Haha I can dance to that.......grazie mille Vidya! ;-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Wow. That's some date. Lovely poem Frieda

[Frieda P]

You mean yours aren't all like this? ;-) Thanks Baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

LMAO!! I have my moments

[Frieda P]

Hahaha We live in moments........ ;-)