'tween raindrops

'tween raindrops

A Poem by Frieda P

i yearn for you
   'tween raindrops
   silkiness
    of early morn's dew,
 spirit
    of twilight's mist
 dark cherry wine's
    intoxication
 & comforts 
    of a different rhyme
those spaces 
   that enchant musings
toxic perfum'd lacings
     air filled of metaphorical
blush'd smoke
    gasping for surrender
'tween honey'd breaths
         wafting in my mind 
  of nectar'd 
       burgundy enchantments


© 2014 Frieda P


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Great work as always, Frieda - such beautiful use of language and imagery!! "dark cherry wine's intoxication & comforts of a different rhyme" evokes a multitude of emotions and thoughts.

Somehow, I initially read "different rhyme" as "different time" when I first read it - perhaps that's what I had expected you to say. The line "air filled of metaphorical/blush'd smoke" is amazing too - I pictured a reddish-pink puff of smoke bursting in the air.

And one thing that makes your poems distinctly yours (as you probably know) is the 'ds at the end of certain words. Without your name on it, I still might say, "Must be a Frieda poem!" Wonderful and enjoyable to read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Huge smiles here, you made my morning Eric, thanks so much for your glowing review!



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beautiful poignant yearning, frieda. and by the way it's my first time to hear the song and it's good. it fits the poem's concept. =)

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much gabrielle, glad you enjoyed, and I love Dave Matthews, his music is poetry. :-)
What a beautiful weaving of words...splendid tapestry ....
I admire your abilities..maybe someday you'll show me where you find all those lovely thoughts and I too can pen such material.
Admiration.
Scott

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha you'd be freaked out in my mind Scott, those 'spaces between' always intrigues me, jazz'd you enj.. read more
To wake up in a misty morning sunrise and peer between the colors and find something that surpasses the beauty that I see as does your poem this morning my sweet friend is as if I haven't risen at all, but still lie in a dream state, feeling the vibrations of life and the warmth of love caressing me. Sipping my first cuppa of the morning, its taste of an enhance flavoring because of your words. I sit here now gazing off into the distance, though my eyes only see the wonder that is you. This poem has touched me to my core this morning. You have a talent that is so unique and oh so wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us.

Hiding this away in my favorites...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Jack, you better stop showing up my poetry with your poetic reviews my friend..ha thanks, I love thi.. read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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