'tween raindrops

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Great work as always, Frieda - such beautiful use of language and imagery!! "dark cherry wine's intoxication & comforts of a different rhyme" evokes a multitude of emotions and thoughts.

Somehow, I initially read "different rhyme" as "different time" when I first read it - perhaps that's what I had expected you to say. The line "air filled of metaphorical/blush'd smoke" is amazing too - I pictured a reddish-pink puff of smoke bursting in the air.

And one thing that makes your poems distinctly yours (as you probably know) is the 'ds at the end of certain words. Without your name on it, I still might say, "Must be a Frieda poem!" Wonderful and enjoyable to read.

[Frieda P]

Huge smiles here, you made my morning Eric, thanks so much for your glowing review!

[Diana]

Ethereal, dreamy. Not a fan of the song...though the poem was grand.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Diana, glad you enjoyed.

[Shaun Payton]

Passion is a wonderful inspiration and experience.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Shaun, long time no see...how've you been?

[Shaun Payton]

Yeah, been a bit, Im doing better. How are you?

[Raymond Federle]

OOOH...this is a yummy poem.. well done. I like Dave Matthews band as well :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Raymond, jazz'd you liked :-)

[sharonlee]

Ah... such sweet enchantment. Lovely piece to read, delicious metaphors.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much sharonlee, jazz'd you enjoyed.

[Pryde Foltz]

A beautiful piece. Enchanting.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Pryde...

[Dhaye]

Reminds me of something, Frieda. Yearning for someone is always touching, and yet you wonderfully presented it here.

Well-penned!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

"i yearn for you
'tween raindrops
silkiness
of early morn's dew,
spirit"
Beautiful and sweet words in the poem. I like the above lines. Yearning for someone is hard to do. You described yearning with skill and beauty. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Coyote, I'm so thrilled you enjoy'd this one.

[Lydia Shutter]

The words are like lacy ribbons of loveliness in this one, Frieda. Incredible imagery! Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Oh I like that, thanks Lydi!

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Not to be forward, but that read like sex! Found myself lost in the gentle sensuality of this piece.

[Frieda P]

Not a bad place to be Travis ha, jazz'd it took you there, thanks!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Not a bad place at all... Well, there should be a lil bad there. ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha, bad is not good when it comes to that luv...perhaps naughty. ;-)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I stand corrected. ;)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A gracious and indelible piece that relates well, good read.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille love.