of early morn's dew, spirit of twilight's mist dark cherry wine's intoxication & comforts of a different rhyme those spaces that enchant musings toxic perfum'd lacings air filled of metaphorical blush'd smoke gasping for surrender 'tween honey'd breaths wafting in my mind of nectar'd burgundy enchantments
Great work as always, Frieda - such beautiful use of language and imagery!! "dark cherry wine's intoxication & comforts of a different rhyme" evokes a multitude of emotions and thoughts.
Somehow, I initially read "different rhyme" as "different time" when I first read it - perhaps that's what I had expected you to say. The line "air filled of metaphorical/blush'd smoke" is amazing too - I pictured a reddish-pink puff of smoke bursting in the air.
And one thing that makes your poems distinctly yours (as you probably know) is the 'ds at the end of certain words. Without your name on it, I still might say, "Must be a Frieda poem!" Wonderful and enjoyable to read.
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10 Years Ago
Huge smiles here, you made my morning Eric, thanks so much for your glowing review!
"i yearn for you
'tween raindrops
silkiness
of early morn's dew,
spirit"
Beautiful and sweet words in the poem. I like the above lines. Yearning for someone is hard to do. You described yearning with skill and beauty. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
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10 Years Ago
Thanks so much Coyote, I'm so thrilled you enjoy'd this one.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..