'tween raindrops

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Great work as always, Frieda - such beautiful use of language and imagery!! "dark cherry wine's intoxication & comforts of a different rhyme" evokes a multitude of emotions and thoughts.

Somehow, I initially read "different rhyme" as "different time" when I first read it - perhaps that's what I had expected you to say. The line "air filled of metaphorical/blush'd smoke" is amazing too - I pictured a reddish-pink puff of smoke bursting in the air.

And one thing that makes your poems distinctly yours (as you probably know) is the 'ds at the end of certain words. Without your name on it, I still might say, "Must be a Frieda poem!" Wonderful and enjoyable to read.

[Frieda P]

Huge smiles here, you made my morning Eric, thanks so much for your glowing review!

[Cassie]

Today Frieda, your page is a breath of fresh air, I am enjoying reading

[Frieda P]

Smiling, thanks so much Cassie, so happy you enjoyed this one, I rather like this one myself :-)

[Justine]

I feel like someone just wafted a silk scarf over my eyes as I read this. It is such a beautiful write ! You have written it in a perfect form that extols the romantic genre well and I love the presentation and font color too. "Dark cherry wine's intoxication" - a superb line. Loved this. Justine :)

[Frieda P]

Oh I adore that silk scarf response Justine, thanks so much! :-)

[Mark]

Aww you don't have to long for me. :P

[Frieda P]

In your dreams hon lol, ha I meant thanks Mark!

[Mark]

uh huh you're welcome.

[N!LoC]

tween? ... ok please help me out here... whats this about? lol

[Frieda P]

haha N...just another word for 'between', you can figure the rest out for yourself hon! ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

My Lady it is 05:10 and you are still going strong with intoxicating verse that draws on rich and vibrant metaphors to bring feeling and colour and taste to the page. Oh and Jack is soooooo smooth I am calling him Jack Glass from here on in lol!

[Frieda P]

Ah my Lord, you humble me with your charm'd words, and laughing at Jack Glass..ha.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful. You definitely have amazing talent.

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kaze, you're sweet for saying.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :)

[Solilokiss]

I don't know how to write an adequate response to the beauty of this. It has a delicate feel and yet is so ripe and fragrant. Well done, Frieda, so well done, indeed.

[Frieda P]

That was beyond adequate Soliokiss, thanks so much indeed.

[Damien Thibodeaux]

I felt my mind floating in the early morning fog as I read this. A semi-sweet snapshot in time that took me back to a day when I took pleasure in such moments. Beautifully written.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the luverly review Damien.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Wonderful, as always and very sweet and beautiful!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Gleb!

[Rita L. Sev]

Cherry - honey - nectar - burgundy... This poem indulges my sweet tooth, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Good to know, thanks Rita.... don't forget to brush. ;-)