'tween raindrops

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Great work as always, Frieda - such beautiful use of language and imagery!! "dark cherry wine's intoxication & comforts of a different rhyme" evokes a multitude of emotions and thoughts.

Somehow, I initially read "different rhyme" as "different time" when I first read it - perhaps that's what I had expected you to say. The line "air filled of metaphorical/blush'd smoke" is amazing too - I pictured a reddish-pink puff of smoke bursting in the air.

And one thing that makes your poems distinctly yours (as you probably know) is the 'ds at the end of certain words. Without your name on it, I still might say, "Must be a Frieda poem!" Wonderful and enjoyable to read.

[Frieda P]

Huge smiles here, you made my morning Eric, thanks so much for your glowing review!

[luviva]

Great read Frieda. Thanx for sharing

[Trace]

"'tween honey'd breaths
wafting in my mind
of nectar'd
burgundy enchantments
Love this...... reminds me of the the winery down the street that makes wine from honey and fruit.
no grapes are used to make their wine and their honey and fruit wine is to die for.

What a wonderful poem.
Trace

[Frieda P]

Sounds great, would go with my poem, cheers Trace, thanks so much.

[Trace]

Their honey mead and Bing cherry wine is so yummy
and their Summer Peach is for enjoying on someone you love. (did I say on??? )

[Frieda P]

Ha yes you did, why does that not surprise me? ;-)

[redflutterby]

Sigh...scintallating and seductive...and all of those lovely S words. Lol... ;-)

[Frieda P]

Sorry Red, don't know how I miSSed this one.... ;-) Grazie mille.

[icelandicblue]

Smooth as silk and each word is like a whispered caress. You certainly know your way around sultry my friend.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Anne, sorry for late reply, the cafe has a problem with sending me alerts....

[Eli Lane]

I feel like you're writing out a beautiful spell and it's coming true as you're writing it

[Frieda P]

Thanks again Eli, glad this one touched you....and if only. ;-)

[s y e]

Oooooooh! A romantic poem from Frieda. You always did do romance so well.

This is lovely Frieda. Well done.

[Frieda P]

Thanks noodles, so glad you enjoyed this one.........

[Sarai Lee]

Again, your romantic poetry is lovely! I feel like this poem could go on, and maybe you should add more to it! It feels like it gains momentum and then stops. I enjoyed it greatly, though! I absolutely adore the lines "air filled of metaphorical blush'd smoke..." it brings such a fantastic image of gasping for your lover, and dreaming of them all at once. Beautifully done!

[Frieda P]

Ha I'll speak to the muse about that...thanks, really thrilled you enjoyed this one Sarai!

[Tai Ryens]

Longing for somebody even when the moments that some regard as perfection loom above, and I particularly like the romantic aura I receive from this poem. As if these are lovers and you still yearn for him . . . interesting

[Frieda P]

You read me perfectly Tai, so jazz'd you enjoyed this one, it's one of my favorites. Thanks so much.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Your lover must be one lucky person...if you can write so well...I just wonder...I don't want to write anything more...I don't think I am good enough to review it

[Frieda P]

Psssh nonsense, thanks for your kind words.