of early morn's dew, spirit of twilight's mist dark cherry wine's intoxication & comforts of a different rhyme those spaces that enchant musings toxic perfum'd lacings air filled of metaphorical blush'd smoke gasping for surrender 'tween honey'd breaths wafting in my mind of nectar'd burgundy enchantments
Great work as always, Frieda - such beautiful use of language and imagery!! "dark cherry wine's intoxication & comforts of a different rhyme" evokes a multitude of emotions and thoughts.
Somehow, I initially read "different rhyme" as "different time" when I first read it - perhaps that's what I had expected you to say. The line "air filled of metaphorical/blush'd smoke" is amazing too - I pictured a reddish-pink puff of smoke bursting in the air.
And one thing that makes your poems distinctly yours (as you probably know) is the 'ds at the end of certain words. Without your name on it, I still might say, "Must be a Frieda poem!" Wonderful and enjoyable to read.
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10 Years Ago
Huge smiles here, you made my morning Eric, thanks so much for your glowing review!
Great work as always, Frieda - such beautiful use of language and imagery!! "dark cherry wine's intoxication & comforts of a different rhyme" evokes a multitude of emotions and thoughts.
Somehow, I initially read "different rhyme" as "different time" when I first read it - perhaps that's what I had expected you to say. The line "air filled of metaphorical/blush'd smoke" is amazing too - I pictured a reddish-pink puff of smoke bursting in the air.
And one thing that makes your poems distinctly yours (as you probably know) is the 'ds at the end of certain words. Without your name on it, I still might say, "Must be a Frieda poem!" Wonderful and enjoyable to read.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Huge smiles here, you made my morning Eric, thanks so much for your glowing review!
"'tween honey'd breaths
wafting in my mind
of nectar'd
burgundy enchantments
Love this...... reminds me of the the winery down the street that makes wine from honey and fruit.
no grapes are used to make their wine and their honey and fruit wine is to die for.
Sounds great, would go with my poem, cheers Trace, thanks so much.
10 Years Ago
Their honey mead and Bing cherry wine is so yummy
and their Summer Peach is for enjoying on so.. read moreTheir honey mead and Bing cherry wine is so yummy
and their Summer Peach is for enjoying on someone you love. (did I say on??? )
10 Years Ago
Ha yes you did, why does that not surprise me? ;-)
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Again, your romantic poetry is lovely! I feel like this poem could go on, and maybe you should add more to it! It feels like it gains momentum and then stops. I enjoyed it greatly, though! I absolutely adore the lines "air filled of metaphorical blush'd smoke..." it brings such a fantastic image of gasping for your lover, and dreaming of them all at once. Beautifully done!
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10 Years Ago
Ha I'll speak to the muse about that...thanks, really thrilled you enjoyed this one Sarai!
Longing for somebody even when the moments that some regard as perfection loom above, and I particularly like the romantic aura I receive from this poem. As if these are lovers and you still yearn for him . . . interesting
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10 Years Ago
You read me perfectly Tai, so jazz'd you enjoyed this one, it's one of my favorites. Thanks so much.. read moreYou read me perfectly Tai, so jazz'd you enjoyed this one, it's one of my favorites. Thanks so much.
Your lover must be one lucky person...if you can write so well...I just wonder...I don't want to write anything more...I don't think I am good enough to review it
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..