~if

~if

A Poem by Frieda P

If i trace'd upon your heartstrings, 
scripted sweet words in your name
captured moonbeams & butterflies spirit, 

if a poet's soul could ignite your essence
light the milky-way and make eyes glisten
would you be stargazing upon my face

if zest of living's experiences be captured in a word,
unfurling the mysteries of fantasies ginger
promising you eternity's sublime surrender

Would you stay to dance with me, just one more day....

© 2014 Frieda P


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if a poet's soul could ignite your essence
light the milky-way and make eyes glisten

Only if ...


loved the write !
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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Anand !



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Very pretty Frieda..you have a great heart...always a pleasure to read your soul.
Well done sweetie...

Admiration.
S.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Pretty, now there's a word I've not read about my poetry, thanks so much Scott, jazz'd you enjoyed.... read more
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

ALWAYS...my pleasure.
S.
I imagine that "if" you wrote this for me, I would never stop dancing, eternal, emotional and kind, well done, good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Who said I didn't luv? ;-) Thanks muchly Thomas.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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