~if

If i trace'd upon your heartstrings, 

scripted sweet words in your name

captured moonbeams & butterflies spirit, 

if a poet's soul could ignite your essence

light the milky-way and make eyes glisten

would you be stargazing upon my face

if zest of living's experiences be captured in a word,

unfurling the mysteries of fantasies ginger

promising you eternity's sublime surrender

Would you stay to dance with me, just one more day....

Author's Note

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

if a poet's soul could ignite your essence
light the milky-way and make eyes glisten

Only if ...


loved the write !
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[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Anand !

[luviva]

If I asked you to stay forever would you...? A life full of ifs never to be sidelined even when you finally meet who you can call a soulmate.. The ifs are still there. Nice one your poems r a learning journey for me. Continue inspiring!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much luviva!

[Justsimplyjulia]

sooo romantic.
loved it!
-Dragon

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Dragonheart!

[Bri]

I love how romantic and deep this is. it's beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Bri.

[Rock]

Words from the heart, soft and tender
I do like...very much

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Rock.

[Diana]

If. So many things spring forward from that one word. An insightful write.

[Frieda P]

So true Diana, thanks for pausing.

[Rachelle]

....so lovingly worded.....

[Frieda P]

Thanks for reading this one sweetbind.

[Rita L. Sev]

This is just so beautiful and emotive, Frieda. I am in a melancholy mood tonight, and this has really gripped my heart...

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Rita.

[prodicallife]

Dear Frieda,

You are a glacier of words and imaginations.

A one wind that charms each face and makes them smile finally towards the ending words.

Perhaps, I am totally mesmerized with the poetry.

Thanks for sharing
Stay blessed
Prodical

[Frieda P]

I'm mesmerized by our review, thanks for pausing, and the glowing review Prodical.

[prodicallife]

You are always welcome dear Frieda.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[MsJewel]

This is so soft and romantic Frieda...truly a beautiful poem. You do hold a golden pen my friend.

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Thanks Julie, coming from the jewel of the pen, means a lot my friend. :-)