Ha you are in full range and production mode with this sweet little senyru my Lady.
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Hmm, I thought if it was about nature, it's a Haiku...
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A haiku also includes seasons and has a very different and complex structure does it not?
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You're asking me, I thought you were the expert..................
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"Haiku (俳句 haikai verse?) listen (help·info) (no separate plural form) is a very short form of .. read more"Haiku (俳句 haikai verse?) listen (help·info) (no separate plural form) is a very short form of Japanese poetry typically characterised by three qualities:
The essence of haiku is "cutting" (kiru).[1] This is often represented by the juxtaposition of two images or ideas and a kireji ("cutting word") between them,[2] a kind of verbal punctuation mark which signals the moment of separation and colors the manner in which the juxtaposed elements are related.
Traditional haiku consist of 17 on (also known as morae), in three phrases of 5, 7 and 5 on respectively.[3] Any one of the three phrases may end with the kireji.[4] Although haiku are often stated to have 17 syllables,[5] this is inaccurate as syllables and on are not the same.
A kigo (seasonal reference), usually drawn from a saijiki, an extensive but defined list of such words.
Modern Japanese haiku (現代俳句 gendai-haiku?) are increasingly unlikely to follow the tradition of 17 on or to take nature as their subject, but the use of juxtaposition continues to be honored in both traditional and modern haiku.[6] There is a common, although relatively recent, perception that the images juxtaposed must be directly observed everyday objects or occurrences.[7]
In Japanese, haiku are traditionally printed in a single vertical line while haiku in English often appear in three lines to parallel the three phrases of Japanese haiku.[8]"
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Wikipedia.......
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I heard you the first time and I'm still just as confuzzeled ;-) I guess it's an Senryu so...right .. read moreI heard you the first time and I'm still just as confuzzeled ;-) I guess it's an Senryu so...right again John, you happy now? ;-P
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No my son pulled me up on it so not having the wherewithal to get the technical trilogy of the haiku.. read moreNo my son pulled me up on it so not having the wherewithal to get the technical trilogy of the haiku right I avoid even attempting it! Lol
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You know us Americanos, always bending the rules...so I'm just going with it. ha
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..