Poppy Love

You know where I live and breathe,

enchantment in your eyes led us amid a field of poppies,

etching my skin with wildflowers I flourish'd

we languished amongst meadow's feathery pillows

moon shone upon our charm'd sensual dalliance

skies of apricot nectar loom'd brilliant as we merged,

as ethereal stars connected of our primal yearnings,

breathless, we paused in desire's transcendent

 afterglow

Reviews

[Foxemerald]

In your typical vein, a burst of fiery flame brings a world of color, and light, in just a few lines. There is a thundering quality within this poem that takes us into the moment. The entrance of the natural images is mesmerizing, and deeply enhance a message that you cannot miss.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your lovely review Foxemerald, always love hearing from you.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

That must have been one incredible F**k my Lady. Ethereally told mid fields of posies!

[Frieda P]

What a genteel way of putting it John...haha, thanks!

[Pryde Foltz]

etching my skin with wildflowers I flourish'd

we languished amongst meadow's feathery pillows

Sounds like a nice place to hang. Beautiful write, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Indeed, thanks Pryde.

[Lydia Shutter]

Now wait a minute, I KNOW this is not a collaboration and there is that apricot reference again!
There is something so descriptive about that color...bringing to mind the downy peach fuzz and yellow/rosy color of the skin. An afternoon flirtation turning into a dalliance even the stars enjoy watching. I can almost see the afterglow. Soft sensuality mingling with warm desires....and you do this genre so well, Frieda. Obviously inspired by the artwork.....such wonderful poetry. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

I'm very fond of that warm apricot glow, as you can see. Thanks so much, thrilled you enjoyed this one Lydikey.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Brilliant Freida....I wish you had written a little more...

[Frieda P]

Thanks Chandradhish, not sure where to go after the glow, except to light one up ;-) Thanks so much....

[KeeD]

"we languished amongst meadow's feathery pillows" wow, I just want to lay upon this line for a while, it's so beautiful.. and comfortably perfect.
I honestly think you were put on this planet to write poetry. You can do it constantly masterpiece after masterpiece. It comes natural, it comes with such poise and perfection. I love the grace this piece brings and the desire for me to desire such desire.

[Frieda P]

Lot of desire there, ha thanks Kee, you're always so kind my sweet friend.

[Sami Khalil]

Those simple infatuations and touching moments can lead that puppy love to serious afterglows turning the primal desires into intertwined oneness...A splendid poem indeed...:).......................

[Frieda P]

Like 'intertwined oneness'...I should have used that! ;-) Grazie mille Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Use it any time. You are welcome...:)..................

[Frieda P]

Perhaps next time the 'mood' hits. ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :>)....................

[Ahena MK]

Nice writing....
Ahena :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Ahena :-)

[Arthur Henn]

Eight lines of beautiful verse. The title caught my eye, the poppy is my favorite flower beside the rose.

I'm a lover of nature... The poem you wrote (Poppy Love) is a love of nature bringing two souls together.

Wonderful! Writing, Frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Arthur, I'm touched by your words.

[SAYED THANGAL]

the words and images lead to celestial spot.

[Frieda P]

Perfect, thanks Sayed...

[Lyn Anderson]

I think it funny that as a person nearly driven mad by misplaced apostrophes that you are so flawless in your unconventional use of them. What a great piece.

[Frieda P]

Ha, now that's quite the compliment coming from you....grazie mille KL.