Missed the Boat

Missed the Boat

A Poem by Frieda P
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Unicorns & Wooly Mammoths...oh my!

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Noah said 'you missed the boat'
the unicorns horns stabbed at the air
'how could you leave us magical creatures here,
the most magnificent of them all'?

Pondering upon this question Noah said,
'sometimes fantasy of the mind is the best kind, 
you'll live on for eternity, never to become extinct'.

The unicorns guffawed in disbelief,
'we'd gladly take our chances with the rest,
but apparently you know what is best'!

So the unicorns lived on in perpetuity,
you can bet the wooly mammoths 
wish'd they'd been absent that day...


© 2014 Frieda P


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Ha. You silly goose, unicorns are still around... They just don't bother with Noah. The rainbow was actually how they escaped the flood and made it back again. Noah thought it was all about him... Typical preacher.
;)
Funny write.
I don't know much about the Mammoths... They were too heavy to cross the rainbow.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I think the silly geese made it on the ark....thanks Scott ;-)
 David Scott

10 Years Ago

Indeed they did!



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I loved this. I love how you looked at; made me think and look at it from your perspective. You have a very wicked imagination. I love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You have no clue haha, thanks Kimmie!
I love your take on this. What a magical thought you have created. Your mind dances in many different steps and all of them capture our hearts. This was great Frieda...very cool.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh thanks Jack, thought I'd try something different for a change, jazz'd you enjoyed my sillies!

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Tags: Noah, boat, unicorns, extinction, wooly mammoth, silly, ark, magical, creatures

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Frieda P
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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