dis connected

dis connected,

obliterated into tiny pulverized pieces

you took flight without an omen

pierced my soul never to be the same

songs upon a prayer's wing'd escape  

once there were two with a single connection

secrets of the heart tuned for perpetuity

nothing lasts forever except memories 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Some souls are touched forever and can never be the same after that for they have to have that winged escape from it all. A very sad write in a festive season. I pray the new year will be bright for you...:)......................

[icelandicblue]

Nothing lasts forever except for memories. This was a painful piece to read yet filled with a kind of beautiful destruction.

[Pryde Foltz]

Keep you pen to paper and I will keep reading.

[MOON]

Poignant , beautiful write loss and heartbreak and disconnect.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

"Only time lasts forever." if you think about it.
Bravo on the short gut wrenching piece.

[s y e]

That song makes me cry all the time.... it's just so sad. It is actually the saddest Christmas song out this year.

Anyway, you're poem speaks volumes, and the emotion is so strong. A beautiful, sad poem but as always your poem touched my heart. xo

[emmajoy]

A beautiful but sad poem, wrapped in that one word, 'memories' - and thank the good Lord for those. As always, Frieda, you touch others' hearts as you display your own. Smiling here, so happy to see the door's open and I do believe you're saying, 'Hi, you, come on in!'