dis connected

dis connected

A Poem by Frieda P

dis connected,
obliterated into tiny pulverized pieces
you took flight without an omen
pierced my soul never to be the same
songs upon a prayer's wing'd escape  
once there were two with a single connection
secrets of the heart tuned for perpetuity
nothing lasts forever except memories 

© 2013 Frieda P


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awwww....its true that nothing lasts forever except memories. I enjoyed this Frieda

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love the idea of "dis connected", and the way that you presented it. You write of emotion and the depth of the heart, whether that be tragic or soul dancing, in such an intense and provocative way. I never tire of your words, and I am hoping you are feeling the love that abounds for you here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


entanglements,...needing to be broken...assunder into pieces...communication needs spoken to ourselves ...you are loved you are gorgeous...yes I am....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write about feeling unconnected and lost with only memories...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hell of a time to say much of anything when ya hurt, but you did and said it well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Memories - we cling to them so strongly, though they can cause so much pain... Beautiful work, Frieda.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And memories are what we make of them. Sad and sweet poem. Nice to see something of yours again.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sad and heartfelt. I've missed reading your beautiful poetry.

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


A piece that builds a creature within us all, well done, good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hugs, sweet lady. I thought you were away from the cafe, too. A sad yet strong writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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