Silent Pain

Another great photo prompt from the noodlebumble, thanks! ♥

Silent pain screams volumes

in the middle of the night 

it blares like a herald'd trumpet

by day its sound blatantly echoes

lost the words to speak

or convey the angst within

stuck in a flutterby's cocoon

with no metamorphosis in sight 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Nothing is quite as frightening as midnight thoughts, as you so put it. They have no meaning, they have no pattern nor will they be able to be fathomed into recognizable constellations. The thoughts just exist, let themselves be known in deafening silence that could probably drive a person to insanity. Well done, fine portrayal indeed.
Might I also say the visual aid only enhanced my personal emotions drawn from the poem? The poem and the picture compliment each other well.

[Frieda P]

Alone in the dark, with dark thoughts, what could be more deafening, thanks so much for your gracious review Tai.

[Belle]

I was about to give review but when I scrolled down I've read Tai's comment. I cannot say more, he said it all.

Now this silent scream you have shouted to us will go to my favorite shelf. Thank you for sharing, Frieda.

[s y e]

Wow Frifri - You have outdone yourself here! This is mind blowing. How scary are midnight thoughts sometimes? Have you ever had a bad dream and woke up trying to scream but it's just not happening? That's freaky.

Your emotion in this is so raw. The wording is so powerful it could blow you away. Absolutely amazing, I told you could do it! ;-) xo

[Leigh]

I hear your pain

Nice closing lines x 2

Great image to back this one up

A strong write

[Frieda P]

Really the image is what inspired this one leigh, thanks so much.

[Dr. Wood ?]

CACOON?

Easily done

another stormer

the title alone is poetry in itself

[Frieda P]

Oopsie, thanks doc, will get on that toot sweet!