[Exposing] Love

'translation in the code of love' ~A collaboration~ Jack & Frieda

Moon glow confetti and tea leaf decisions

Skywriting written in ginger stardust

Creamsicle cosmos a' swirl of affection

Burnished songbirds sing in the key of destiny

   Low hanging fruit drips of endless day nectar

   Drizzling sweet messages of serendipity

   Drenching your lips, your taste effervescent    

   Lingering on a relish'd brink of aromatic happenstance

 

      Longing grips this heart in desired definitions

      Words defined in Braille still undecipherable

      Blinded by your essence, my fingers search the meaning 

      Kismet speaks the language of secrets little known or (unexposed)

 

      In a whispered voice that only love could translate

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

The language of love is both beautiful and powerful. You two have interwoven your voices in perfect harmony in this piece and your imagery is sumptuous:

Moon glow confetti and tea leaf decisions
Skywriting written in ginger stardust
Creamsicle cosmos a' swirl of affection
Burnished songbirds sing in the key of destiny

Low hanging fruit drips of endless day nectar
Drizzling sweet messages of serendipity
Drenching your lips, your taste effervescent
Lingering on a relish'd brink of aromatic happenstance

[Frieda P]

Thanks Anne, Jack started it and told me to run with it, we had fun doing this one, jazzed you enjoyed.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Anne. Frieda is a dream to work with.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Another delightful poem. I wholeheartedly agree with icelandicblue. The poem is perfectly and harmoniously crafted, with beautiful words and a graceful tone. Really enjoyed reading this.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for your gracious review Gleb, muchly appreciated.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much my friend. Happy you enjoyed this. Frieda is such an amazing poetess to work with. She really makes me look good.