[Exposing] Love

'translation in the code of love' ~A collaboration~ Jack & Frieda

Moon glow confetti and tea leaf decisions

Skywriting written in ginger stardust

Creamsicle cosmos a' swirl of affection

Burnished songbirds sing in the key of destiny

   Low hanging fruit drips of endless day nectar

   Drizzling sweet messages of serendipity

   Drenching your lips, your taste effervescent    

   Lingering on a relish'd brink of aromatic happenstance

 

      Longing grips this heart in desired definitions

      Words defined in Braille still undecipherable

      Blinded by your essence, my fingers search the meaning 

      Kismet speaks the language of secrets little known or (unexposed)

 

      In a whispered voice that only love could translate

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

The language of love is both beautiful and powerful. You two have interwoven your voices in perfect harmony in this piece and your imagery is sumptuous:

Moon glow confetti and tea leaf decisions
Skywriting written in ginger stardust
Creamsicle cosmos a' swirl of affection
Burnished songbirds sing in the key of destiny

Low hanging fruit drips of endless day nectar
Drizzling sweet messages of serendipity
Drenching your lips, your taste effervescent
Lingering on a relish'd brink of aromatic happenstance

[Frieda P]

Thanks Anne, Jack started it and told me to run with it, we had fun doing this one, jazzed you enjoyed.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Anne. Frieda is a dream to work with.

[Sanober]

This truly is an exquisite collaboration.....so seamlessly woven. the imagery is a treat for the senses. ..one to be savoured sip by sip. Wonderful job, my friend.

[David Scott]

I like how well you and Jack pull the best from each other.
You have a very complimentary style together.
The last line is truth.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Two of my favorite poets in Writer's Cafe have decided to join forces, this is----something! Really, your "voices" have mingled in perfect harmony. Oh, I haven't collaborated with anybody. How does that work?

[AYVID N]

Frieda and Jack, your thoughts are so in sync with each other, so complimentary, the result is a beautiful symphony. Beauty reinforces beauty in this poem, dipped in scents and fragrances....conjuring marvellous images and thoughts. Thank you for sharing, I am priviledged to enjoy this read.

[NeiL ArandA]

This is a very flavorful expression of love . Reminds someone when they were young and intoxicated with love . Its like the sea of destiny has brought them together and not just some mere coincidence . Well constructed piece . Thanks for sharing

[writing mojo]

Your seclusive language, vents sweet serenades through the bounty transition love in this poem, I can tell your typing connection with Jack is an orbital nature of like minded thoughts..great piece

[ron]

A wonderful poem about the language of love.

[Ken Simm.]

I think you must pick these words of yours out of the sky when the stars just begin to shine.

[Horizon K.]

Moon glow confetti and tea leaf decisions
Skywriting written in ginger stardust

Oh, this is utterly delicious! Every line! A totally synergistic collab! The language of love... spoken fluidly and fluently.... Yum...

[Frieda P]

Doing the happy dance to your review Horizon, thanks muchly!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much.