A Moment in Sanctity

Where there once was music lie a deaf ear

entombed in icy landslides of an encased heart

seasons changed quicker than the ocean tides

summer was Old Man Winter in an instant,

in delusions of melting ice caps

came a premonition of candle shimmer

dancing shadows over moonbeams,

an inner sanctum of hopeful resolution

when the night exploded within a promise

of childlike awe and expectation,

spring flew blindly like a bird with soul'd wings

a hush fell over the             turbulent rush

dulcet melodious tunes captivated the night~

at least in this moment there was sanctity

Author's Note

captcha~remold

Artwork by my lovely friend Star*

Reviews

[s y e]

You know how much I love Stars work, she is a gem. How is she doing? Hope she is well, tell her I said hi. :-D

No matter how fast times goes, how fast the seasons change, how fast our days move we always have the here and now. This is beautiful, the wording and flow is amazing and imagery is mind blowing. I loved it.

Flip flops and all that jazz, absolument magnifique poupée! ;-) xo

[Frieda P]

Thanks luv, I will, she's doing great at the moment, jazzed you enjoyed noodlebumble. :-) xo

[Dr. Wood ?]

another clever write from the Queen.....I was a little put off by the repetition of the word..ENCASED.....I hesitate to complain because I sometimes get lambasted by some crazed fan...So if you are out there fan....Gumbo de blag wot frillst.......just a thought

[Frieda P]

I totally agree with you, my bad, I don't know where my head is at these days....thanks doc, who's the creepy fan?

[Dr. Wood ?]

no idea...maybe YOU do not have him/her...but I have been caught a few times...it sort of put me off reviewing but not now...I just spout a load of gobbeldy gook back at em

[Frieda P]

Who the bloody 'ell could find a good reason to pick on the likes of you?!

[Dr. Wood ?]

Gbrollkkkas......don't know

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

When time of purity comes, we must be thankful for it and feel it even for a moment.
Nice one, Frieda. Thanks for the share.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your gracious review dhaye.

[Pryde Foltz]

Certainly we must grab these moment whenever they are offered. Splendid, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Pryde.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The last two lines were the icing on the cake... such a serene imagery, Friedalicious.
As a whole this is truly magnificent...you have captured the beauty of this moment in a timeless piece.
LOVELY!!~xoxo~:)

[Frieda P]

Jazzed you enjoyed Robbie, thanks muchly my sweet friend! xox

[Jack...]

Exceptional my sweet friend. Regardless of how fast time moves, how quickly the seasons pass or how many times the sun and the moon exchange places in the sky, we always have this moment right here...whenever and wherever that is. Amazing Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jack, you always humble me with your kind praise.