A Moment in Sanctity

A Moment in Sanctity

A Poem by Frieda P

Where there once was music lie a deaf ear
entombed in icy landslides of an encased heart
seasons changed quicker than the ocean tides
summer was Old Man Winter in an instant,
in delusions of melting ice caps
came a premonition of candle shimmer
dancing shadows over moonbeams,
an inner sanctum of hopeful resolution
when the night exploded within a promise
of childlike awe and expectation,
spring flew blindly like a bird with soul'd wings
a hush fell over the             turbulent rush
dulcet melodious tunes captivated the night~

at least in this moment there was sanctity


© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P
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Artwork by my lovely friend Star*

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You know how much I love Stars work, she is a gem. How is she doing? Hope she is well, tell her I said hi. :-D

No matter how fast times goes, how fast the seasons change, how fast our days move we always have the here and now. This is beautiful, the wording and flow is amazing and imagery is mind blowing. I loved it.

Flip flops and all that jazz, absolument magnifique poupée! ;-) xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks luv, I will, she's doing great at the moment, jazzed you enjoyed noodlebumble. :-) xo



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another clever write from the Queen.....I was a little put off by the repetition of the word..ENCASED.....I hesitate to complain because I sometimes get lambasted by some crazed fan...So if you are out there fan....Gumbo de blag wot frillst.......just a thought

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. Wood ?

11 Years Ago

no idea...maybe YOU do not have him/her...but I have been caught a few times...it sort of put me off.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Who the bloody 'ell could find a good reason to pick on the likes of you?!
Dr. Wood ?

11 Years Ago

Gbrollkkkas......don't know
When time of purity comes, we must be thankful for it and feel it even for a moment.
Nice one, Frieda. Thanks for the share.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your gracious review dhaye.
Certainly we must grab these moment whenever they are offered. Splendid, Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Pryde.
The last two lines were the icing on the cake... such a serene imagery, Friedalicious.
As a whole this is truly magnificent...you have captured the beauty of this moment in a timeless piece.
LOVELY!!~xoxo~:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Jazzed you enjoyed Robbie, thanks muchly my sweet friend! xox
Exceptional my sweet friend. Regardless of how fast time moves, how quickly the seasons pass or how many times the sun and the moon exchange places in the sky, we always have this moment right here...whenever and wherever that is. Amazing Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Jack, you always humble me with your kind praise.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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