A Moment in Sanctity

Where there once was music lie a deaf ear

entombed in icy landslides of an encased heart

seasons changed quicker than the ocean tides

summer was Old Man Winter in an instant,

in delusions of melting ice caps

came a premonition of candle shimmer

dancing shadows over moonbeams,

an inner sanctum of hopeful resolution

when the night exploded within a promise

of childlike awe and expectation,

spring flew blindly like a bird with soul'd wings

a hush fell over the             turbulent rush

dulcet melodious tunes captivated the night~

at least in this moment there was sanctity

Author's Note

captcha~remold

Artwork by my lovely friend Star*

Reviews

[s y e]

You know how much I love Stars work, she is a gem. How is she doing? Hope she is well, tell her I said hi. :-D

No matter how fast times goes, how fast the seasons change, how fast our days move we always have the here and now. This is beautiful, the wording and flow is amazing and imagery is mind blowing. I loved it.

Flip flops and all that jazz, absolument magnifique poupée! ;-) xo

[Frieda P]

Thanks luv, I will, she's doing great at the moment, jazzed you enjoyed noodlebumble. :-) xo

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I missed reading your poetry, Frieda. Sorry my reviews come late these days. Well, this piece sure gave me a moment in sanctity. :)

[AYVID N]

Changing seasons turn pages of our lives and our love...

Spell-binding imagery grips me in these lines...


"spring flew blindly like a bird with soul'd wings

a hush fell over the turbulent rush

dulcet melodious tunes captivated the night~

at least in this moment there was sanctity"


I am left with a magical, dream-like feeling....Thank you for sharing Frieda...

[redflutterby]

Relationships can cycle much like the seasons...the change is so fast it may catch us unaware. Hopefully there is those moments of sanctity to grasp if only fleeting. A wonderful write to go with Stars always beautiful art.

[Frieda P]

So true, thanks Red, glad you enjoyed this one.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Another hailed write:) Beautiful:) my dear friend, You write in such a way I never will, With deep words that put a hush to the wind:) Hope your feeling better today:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Jonathan, jazzed you enjoyed...better today thanks. :-)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Welcome :) loves theses words you always say and use makes me smile:) jazzed yes:) glad to hear:)

[Tom]

Well at least it was good while it lasted, but then again all good things come to an end !

A soulful tale of worn out romance, diligently penned !

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Tom.

[icelandicblue]

The moments captured in spring echo beyond your words. It seems the seasons fly by us but rebirth and renewal remind us of better things where the hope we hold in our hearts can flutter in the sunlight.

[Frieda P]

Love your review, thanks so much Anne.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A beautiful poem with gorgeous imagery! It was like looking on an impressionist painting and being lost in the abyssal depths of some distant memory. Lovely poem.
One thing to note:

In the first line, I think lie should be lies.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your gracious review and the heads up Gleb, will check that out.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Some splendid artwork here Moonbeam.
I was captivated by your words.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Dale, jazzed you enjoyed.

[iliOZ]

too bad this wonderful short poem is that, short. i felt i was in venice, riding the gondola and listened to the singing of a syrene

[Frieda P]

What a wonderful thought, thanks for saying OZ.