Titanic Betrayal

Titanic Betrayal

A Poem by Frieda P

You don't want to rock the boat for justice
you tread water within a dead man's float
the quintessential boat springs a leak
purveyors sitting on the dock of the bay watch in awe
as life preservers available are already accounted for
you sink to the depths of the Titanic,
 nary a Jack in sight to save the day



  

© 2013 Frieda P


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This is one of my favorite movies, Frieda. Knowing that this really happened makes it all the more chilling. There were enough boats to save everyone, but only part of the people escaped. The thought of half filled boats floating within hearing distance of the freezing and drowning people makes me so sad. Very well done in so few words. Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I know that's the saddest part Angi, but real life is such at times...thanks for your thoughts here... read more



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Yikes this movie makes me cry like a big baby.... A really powerful message here, lovie -- I loved it this one. You actually have me in tears, ha.

Lovely one Frifri.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I hated that part of the movie..poor jack freezing to save the woman he loved. Cried like a baby. And of course my favorite line was..."you jump...I jump". But you already know that. Ha..

The meaning behind this poem is pretty simple...to watch someone flounder helplessly while you yourself are safe and secure is a terrible act against another human being. Too not want to be inconvenienced or bothered by some effort to do the right thing may say a lot about a persons character. In day to day life..standing up for another person can be done in many ways without putting your a*s on the line. But then again some things require that...putting another before yourself. x

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Mine too Red, but he had already saved her life in so many ways....as to the rest of it, exactly. x
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Jack? Hell, I was busy with Rose. Anyway, again, nice job and a fun read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Nude drawings again I'll bet..............
Wow. A powerful message here. People who watch the titanic drown but they don't save what or they can and delight in their demise so to speak...Titanic had life boats for the rich and I always found that interesting in the story . All about the rich and the powerful which is so sad and unacceptable...Bravo...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Sami, glad you got so much out of it, it speaks to not only the human spirit, but greed, ign.. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Wow. All true and relevant...You are welcome muchly...:)............

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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