Pink Posies on Unicorn Wings

Pink Posies on Unicorn Wings

A Poem by Frieda P
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*You cannot hide yourself behind a fairytale forever*

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You want to read little pristine pretty posies not get involved betwixt & ignore the thorns of life whatcha gonna do when your scratch becomes infected hiding in the bushes of denial will get you hives of the contradicting type, bucking like a bronco amidst the flowery storm clouds of refusal riding through wild fields of four leaf clovers on unicorns wings of phantasmal puff'd perfectly pink skies pseudo fairy tales conjured up in the mind never to cross the median line of reality's mock deception swallow the chimerical pill of inauthentic utopia just be sure your mythical allegory never plays havoc in your secret garden of rainbow streaming sublimity, the fall is greater from the zenith of repudiation

© 2013 Frieda P


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If denial is a Unicorn sliding down a rainbow reality is a wolverine chewing on your a*s.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ignoring the thorns only gets you tangled up in them more, and living in pseudo-fairy tales makes you miss the bliss - and wisdom - of reality. Outstanding piece, Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Excellent exploration of your theme. Dig the language and style. Some lovely phrases in powerful images. 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yep...you must accept the ironies and do something about them when you can. Honour and create beauty, but protect it too. Great write, Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Denial brings pain,too. There is no fairy tale...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Denial is the perfect anesthesia. Well, it won't be long before life catches up with them. Meanwhile, you have all my admiration for penning such wonderful poetry! It hits at the right spots, yet delivers the punch artistically and beautifully. Thanks for sharing Frieda! You have another winner!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Believe me, If I could live in a fairytale forever I would. This is a relatable poem to many of us here on the cafe.

A mind blowing write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow!!!!! This is the best poem I have read all day, Thank you for sharing such a lovely write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Now you have me scared....I am NOT coming out to play....Terrific poem Frieda...I mean, your majesty

Posted 11 Years Ago


We create what we experience to some extent. And some people believe strongly enough others play along.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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