Karmic Dessert
A Poem by
Frieda P
Is it karma or just desserts
that brings you to this humbling juncture
kneeling in the excrement you imposed on others
© 2013 Frieda P
Author's Note
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Reviews
Reminds me of the saying "He that stirs the s**t pot should have to lick the spoon." Yep - karma is the one who doles out that dessert... wicked vent, Frieda!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Karma is just the beginning.....
Posted 11 Years Ago
Karma is just the beginning.....
very mind provoking simple words...i think books arent enough to answer this( if it can be answered)
Posted 11 Years Ago
very mind provoking simple words...i think books arent enough to answer this( if it can be answered)
LOVE this.....a rant that puts someone right in their place. What goes around comes around and payback is a b***h.....I hope the person for whom this is intended reads it. Lydi**
Posted 11 Years Ago
LOVE this.....a rant that puts someone right in their place. What goes around comes around and payback is a bitch.....I hope the person for whom this is intended reads it. Lydi**
Karma is just desserts...
Posted 11 Years Ago
Karma is just desserts...
Life IS a circle... we relive everyday
Posted 11 Years Ago
Life IS a circle... we relive everyday
Ha! That cartoon man has got it coming to him up there! SPLAT! I don't know who peed in your cheerios, but what a way to stick it to em! Ha! Angi~
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ha! That cartoon man has got it coming to him up there! SPLAT! I don't know who peed in your cheerios, but what a way to stick it to em! Ha! Angi~
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Ha, it's an old piss, still lurking about...thanks Angi!
Ouch and how - but undoubtedly justified! Has me smiling, one eyebrow raised questioning, other fluttering with giggles! Not only that, a fine pic to a very fine brief piece of, 'Take that, you swine!' :) (too many exclamation marks!!!!)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ouch and how - but undoubtedly justified! Has me smiling, one eyebrow raised questioning, other fluttering with giggles! Not only that, a fine pic to a very fine brief piece of, 'Take that, you swine!' :) (too many exclamation marks!!!!)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Lol, 'take that you swine' exactly!! :-)
11 Years Ago
Grinning.. i can do mean!
11 Years Ago
Ha but you're still so cute when you're doing it! ;-P
Now this one got my ribs cracking. thank you for making me laugh
Posted 11 Years Ago
Now this one got my ribs cracking. thank you for making me laugh
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Always my pleasure to make you smile Sunshine! :-)
Ah... Maybe just cause and effect, but karma works well enough too.
Funny and true, and a little sad...
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ah... Maybe just cause and effect, but karma works well enough too.
Funny and true, and a little sad...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks Scott, glad you read the humor and the acerbity in this one too....
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Frieda P NJ
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll..
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