Last Sigh

....but a teardrop in your essence

that sense will always disquiet

 took my breath away when you took yours

always a flutterby yearning in your flight

  you float with the angels heralding peace

a promise to proclaim faith in all begrud'd

  your last word, 'be kind in my absence'

written in the blood of all mankind

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

This was so sad and heartbreaking when you hear the last words of our dying beloved ones which we will never forget for it is etched in our memories forever. You are kind and you have been that continuously ever since...Thank you for sharing this sad write...:)............

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words and support always my friend, as you know this one was written in blood tears....x

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)...........

[I Am Svetlana]

Such a stunning piece here! Full of true words and inner feelings. Each sigh can mean something different, it just depends on the tone of it and when it is particularly released. Moments of stress, anxiety, panic, grief. A sigh can complete really any emotional setting.

[Strider Marcus Jones]

Sad. Touching. Eloquent. 100/100

[00000000000000000000000..]

Was very sad but held within the heart, So for that was a profound speak within the wind, Cause within that wind is where the heart speaks,And yours speaks loud my friend:) Hope you get well soon:)

[Shivam Murari]

Your vocabulary is well exhibited here, Frieda. I had to look up the dictionary. The song is not necessary. The poem itself is quite painful. Great write.

[s y e]

This is very heartwrenching and sad Frieda - I am so touched by this one. I am at a loss for words, you've blown me away with this one.

[Ruth]

Last wishes or words are always painful, I relate...all we can do is try our best and Frieda, love...you are a kind soul ♥

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the way you introduce this with a broken phrase, there are unknown lines !

[luviva]

"the human heart..." them words are tingling words!
the human heart is a super organ and i agree with you..
poem wise.. it is disheartening and sad to look into someones eyes you used to see all time full of life but is now a closed barrier.. allowing you to venture no further to see their brilliant souls of life.. it is real sad and this was a touching write..!
continue your quest fellow writer.. from you we will learn

[Rita L. Sev]

Mournful words paint a stunning description, Frieda. I hear the tears in your pen...

"be kind in my absence..." good advice, all of us should take these wise words and put them into practice...

[Mark]

I believe life here is just a transition. The best comes later. well, except for sex. I kinda think we all decide to be born here because of sex.