Wing'd Spirit Senryu

Wing'd Spirit Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
"

~an oldie from a 'survivor site'...

"
We are an army

of butterfly warriors

~revamping our wings~


© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
This is an older version of one I wrote on a survivor site,
Robbie's warrior Senryu inspired me to republish it here with a reminder
of the strength & courage we pull from others in the camaraderie with
which we share our life turmoils...


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Bigger, faster, and stronger....

Posted 11 Years Ago


And we lend support to one another, even when our wings are broken...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh, how beautiful! This is stunning love...always revamping, evolving, yes, indeedy...love this ♥

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like how this acknowledges a certain brokenness with overarching strength.

Posted 11 Years Ago


So empowering! We do draw strength from one another...and compassion and empathy too. We reveal emotions we might not reveal to the rest of the world. So lovely. We Rock! :) Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Someone asked me the other day where I get my inspiration and I told them from my poet friends...they are the ones who support me in my writing and feelings...nicely said Frieda...Rose:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I do believe we feed off of each other Rose, thanks muchly :-)
The charge of the light brigade ! ( Tennyson )

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

That's the spirit Tom !
Oh Yes!!!! thank you for reminding us this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Cassie, jazzed you enjoyed!
if WE stick together as one, NOTHING can drive us asunder

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks doc, I feel a bit like Norma Rae now, standing on the table with that Union sign.....
I think the key word in this wonderful poem is "We". Because, with friendship we can do anything. Very nice Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Definitely key Jack, seems even in adversity, when someone says 'really, me too', it just makes thin.. read more

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Added on October 21, 2013
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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