'Still'...

'Still'...

A Poem by Frieda P

If the sun were to set in your eyes
as the moon settled over my soul 
falling to the depths of an ocean's mile
I'd 'still' remember how you made me feel
& everyday that ends in why I'll miss you

© 2013 Frieda P


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Five lines...that's all it took for you to touch my heart with this poem. We all miss people and it affects all of us in different ways...but when the missing is constant and how they made you feel is only found in memories, then the sadness is a pain we only wish we could miss. Frieda, you are an amazing poet and I am so thrilled I have the opportunity to read you and call you friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You've truly touched my heart, this one apparently wrote itself, I had a high temp and when I awoke,.. read more



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Dye
Got a little teary eyed reading this one. You have such a beautiful heart Frieda, it really shines through in everything you write. This was very touching with the butterflies fluttering by and without music (in my opinion). It really says a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Awh you're so sweet to say Dye, thanks so much :-)
Winsome grin on my face. Oh if that feeling could truly be bottled, but then still it lack the warmth. Great one, Frieda. And yes, you are getting a hundred. lol.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha wooo to both Pryde, thanks for your gracious review. :-)
Five lines...that's all it took for you to touch my heart with this poem. We all miss people and it affects all of us in different ways...but when the missing is constant and how they made you feel is only found in memories, then the sadness is a pain we only wish we could miss. Frieda, you are an amazing poet and I am so thrilled I have the opportunity to read you and call you friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You've truly touched my heart, this one apparently wrote itself, I had a high temp and when I awoke,.. read more

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Added on October 20, 2013
Last Updated on October 22, 2013
Tags: sun, moon, ocean, depth, remembrance, feelings

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Frieda P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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