'Still'...

'Still'...

A Poem by Frieda P

If the sun were to set in your eyes
as the moon settled over my soul 
falling to the depths of an ocean's mile
I'd 'still' remember how you made me feel
& everyday that ends in why I'll miss you

© 2013 Frieda P


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Five lines...that's all it took for you to touch my heart with this poem. We all miss people and it affects all of us in different ways...but when the missing is constant and how they made you feel is only found in memories, then the sadness is a pain we only wish we could miss. Frieda, you are an amazing poet and I am so thrilled I have the opportunity to read you and call you friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You've truly touched my heart, this one apparently wrote itself, I had a high temp and when I awoke,.. read more



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Succinct and full of love's message.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm sorry, I'm mesmerized by the butterflies:) But on a more serious note, this was a very touching piece on missing someone we love and the memories we clutch close to our hearts. Beautiful, milady.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A lovely tribute to a missing loved one. A longing felt through tout each line. Nice penning, mr friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Like the thought and how you convey it. 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Strider, very much appreciated.
Oh god, Frieda! Flattery has a limit you know? xD You're so good at this!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha thanks Siren, you humble me my sweet friend!
Blue Ivory

11 Years Ago

You pshh you love it. Admit it. :3
Beautiful serene atmosphere of missing someone.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Mike, muchly appreciated.
You even write lovely poetry when you are sick with a fever...beautiful words Frieda as always...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Never far from my mind I guess Rose, thanks so much. ;-)
Very emotive and inspiring !

You have captivated a beautiful much missed friendship so eloquently Frieda !!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Much appreciated Tom, thanks so much my friend.
Tom

11 Years Ago

And the fluttering butterflies are enchanting !
Lot of birds moving here..nice write !

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Leslie.
very powerful lines. moon setting... just beautiful. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Mark. :-)

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Added on October 20, 2013
Last Updated on October 22, 2013
Tags: sun, moon, ocean, depth, remembrance, feelings

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Frieda P
Frieda P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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