Five lines...that's all it took for you to touch my heart with this poem. We all miss people and it affects all of us in different ways...but when the missing is constant and how they made you feel is only found in memories, then the sadness is a pain we only wish we could miss. Frieda, you are an amazing poet and I am so thrilled I have the opportunity to read you and call you friend.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
You've truly touched my heart, this one apparently wrote itself, I had a high temp and when I awoke,.. read moreYou've truly touched my heart, this one apparently wrote itself, I had a high temp and when I awoke, it was sitting in my notepad, obviously never far from my mind, thanks for your kind heart and being such a good friend always Jack...x
I'm sorry, I'm mesmerized by the butterflies:) But on a more serious note, this was a very touching piece on missing someone we love and the memories we clutch close to our hearts. Beautiful, milady.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..