'Still'...

'Still'...

A Poem by Frieda P

If the sun were to set in your eyes
as the moon settled over my soul 
falling to the depths of an ocean's mile
I'd 'still' remember how you made me feel
& everyday that ends in why I'll miss you

© 2013 Frieda P


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Five lines...that's all it took for you to touch my heart with this poem. We all miss people and it affects all of us in different ways...but when the missing is constant and how they made you feel is only found in memories, then the sadness is a pain we only wish we could miss. Frieda, you are an amazing poet and I am so thrilled I have the opportunity to read you and call you friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You've truly touched my heart, this one apparently wrote itself, I had a high temp and when I awoke,.. read more



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beautiful words.... put simply beautifully...

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem reminds me that true love is unconditional. If one has to live with the lonliness and grief left in its wake... then so be it, because it is better to have loved than not at all.

And you are the masterful poetess who made me think these thoughts with this extremely beautiful poetry. You deserve every applause, every accolade that comes your way, Poetess Numero Uno!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Without a syllable of fiction, I couldn't help but let out a good cry. With this and many, many other contributions to a past broken love I needed someone to say its okay to miss, to long for another. Jack is right, 5 lines...that's all it takes. Thank you for more than penning, but for understanding and solacing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Simply beautiful. Also loved the butterflies...
I will add it to my favourites, I loved it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


its a beautiful and touching poem...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the shadowed butterfly...
The poem conveys deep meaning with just a few words.
This is a special kind of friendship.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Smooth. Even beautiful. Outstanding work Frieda

Posted 11 Years Ago


You always steal my heart, Friedalicious... I'm torn by this heartache... a constant reminder that pain is beautiful too.
Lovely write.~xoxo~

Posted 11 Years Ago


So much love in so few words...There are those that we never will stop missing... Your poem touched my heart Frieda.

:) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


Really touching and beautiful, loveely job!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on October 20, 2013
Last Updated on October 22, 2013
Tags: sun, moon, ocean, depth, remembrance, feelings

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Frieda P
Frieda P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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