`Poetic Dust

`Poetic Dust

A Poem by Frieda P
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Sort of a Tanka just for fun...

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New fangled sandwich
forget two slices of cheese,
not my cuppa tea
if i die before i wake...
make me poetic dust please


© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
Thanks to Benji for the humorous image... ;-)


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LOL I Love this!!.... Steve said it...this is "Priceless"! :D
Could we be more out there?.... I doubt it. ;P

I'm wondering like everyone else... "What are you smokin' today?"...(and can I have some?) :D

Keep it coming Friedalicious!...just not in my sandwich~xoxoxo~ :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahaha Robbie, every once in a while you just have to let crazy rip........! LOL, thanks muchly, ha.. read more
Robbie~xoxo~

11 Years Ago

No wonder I'm feeling crazy-hazy lately...It's because of you! lol ;P




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very intriguing and perfect in every way atomically misdirected....great piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks mojo, jazzed you enjoyed.
Now this is funny, but right on. "make me poetic dust please." Wouldn't that be cool if that were the case? Very cool Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You never know, right? Want bacon with that Jack?
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Crispy please.
Funny , witty and creative...Bravo...
I guess the wind of fate will carry you to lovely places I hope or to a blissful one...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ah blissful one would be so nice, thanks Sami :-)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

So true...You are welcome muchly....:)
..land on my sandwich and you're liable to be consumed before I notice and grant you safe passage elsewhere! Frieda, you do go on. I'm glad I don't need a ticket for most destinations otherwise I'd be flat broke before sunset.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha laughing here Tam, glad you gobbled it down my friend.
LOL I Love this!!.... Steve said it...this is "Priceless"! :D
Could we be more out there?.... I doubt it. ;P

I'm wondering like everyone else... "What are you smokin' today?"...(and can I have some?) :D

Keep it coming Friedalicious!...just not in my sandwich~xoxoxo~ :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahaha Robbie, every once in a while you just have to let crazy rip........! LOL, thanks muchly, ha.. read more
Robbie~xoxo~

11 Years Ago

No wonder I'm feeling crazy-hazy lately...It's because of you! lol ;P

LOL Priceless Mrs.R. I thought you would get a kick out of it, I didn't know it would inspire you this much ;P I'm glad it did though. Your lines still would have been awesome even without the image accompaniment. Great job my friend ;) xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL Benji, thanks again, I told you that you didn't have to be stoned to find that one hilarious...h.. read more
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Hahaha Very true ;) xo
Lmao....uhmmm what were you smoking when you wrote this hun? ;-pp

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahah nothing, isn't it pathetic that my mind naturally works that way? LOL ;-P
redflutterby

11 Years Ago

Ha...or its poetic genius! xo
Poetic space dust... in my sandwich. Ok, now I can think of nothing except whose dust I have been ingesting... A curious pondering here, Frieda!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha a curious thought & image, I had to take it somewhere...hahah, thanks Rita!
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Dye
My god that's a bizarre poem. Not yours, the one that inspired you. LOL My mind is traveling to the gutter just thinking about a Frieda sandwich. But I won't go there. hahaha xoxox

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LMAO........................!
redflutterby

11 Years Ago

I'll go there...lmao!!!
Dye

11 Years Ago

Hehehehe-----and that's why I like you guys so much. lol

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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