Thank you sweet petulia (Emma Joy) for the luverly pic and inspiration.
There is a place of calm within my soul,
an autumn that wraps around my heart
that reminisces young and vintage memories
where old friends visit, share the warmth of coffee,
that place of colorful reverie whispers my name
blush of summer gone and renewal has begun
shades of firewood on wood burning stoves
as spirited leaves begin to fall to their demise
I catch the memories like snowflakes on the tongue
waiting in the shadows, a stoic season ready to nip its chill
in this moment I relish the burnished views afore
the golden, fruition of a gathering equinox of thoughts
they dance amongst the scarlet hues playfully amused
until old man winter comes to tuck them in yet again
"that reminisces young and vintage memories where old friends visit, share the warmth of coffee,"
I enjoyed the poem. The above is my favorite. Would be nice to gather with old friends. To be able to talk till we can't no more. Thank you for the memories and amazing poetry.
Coyote
So beautiful! ^_^ This poem was like an abrupt interruption brought about by happiness. It is nostalgic and just so happy. Thank you for this amazing poem :)
That was so beautiful and loved listening to Eric sing as I watched the video....such a beautiful time of year and hope you are getting better as i heard you have the flu...boy i better get my vaccine soon.:)
you have a beautiful form of pottraying imagery. i could feel every line this one especially I catch the memories like snowflakes on the tongue waiting in the shadows
There's just something about autumn. The beautiful colors...the smell...crisp blue sky. It's so vibrant and bright...then winter sets in with grey cold days. What a sumptuous ode to the season. x
Absolutely beautiful Frieda..I see fall and all of it's colors as a beautiful transition from this life to the next. That after a physical death, paradise awaits...Although those who have passed are deeply missed.
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Thanks for your visit and thoughts here SarahLin, much appreciated.
`` Isn't it ironic, that we all love autumn and yet it's the time everything dies? ``
I don't remember the original speaker of the poem and I don't believe I've quoted her correctly, but nonetheless, the poem reminded me of the line. Well done!
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Don't think I know that one Tai, let me know if you recall, thanks.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..