Saturday Senryu

Saturday stuffing~

the day the diet is off!

We'll cry tomorrow...

Reviews

[s y e]

Ha, sounds like my Saturday! I wish everyday could be like this! I hate them damn calories.....!

[icelandicblue]

I like the idea of calories sewing our clothes tighter like evil little elves. ; 0

[TL Boehm]

amen sister. Amen. wait. what is this diet thing of which you speak?

[Aethereal]

I had some fun reading this pleasant poem today. You inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you:

Calories

Little balls of energy
meant to live as force and fire,
each and every calorie
needs to be consumed entire.

Please don’t turn ‘em into fat.
Dance, skip, run about at play,
exercise upon a mat
else you gain a pound a day.

[Dye]

I don't know how I missed this one yesterday. You have no idea how much this one feels like it was written for me. I completely screwed my diet yesterday and have been bitching about it all day today. My goodness, are you in my head or what???

[DrD]

You are not fat until you have your own zip code, Frieda. You don't need to worry. But your humor not only keeps you going but puts us on the same road with you. We all thank you for that. A truly fun read that I will read again.

[Marie]

Actually the day I don't diet is Sunday...which it is right now, thank goodness...

[Michael G. Smith]

Or in other words unfairies.

[Pryde Foltz]

Loved the definition for calories. Very funny. But no crying, okay.

[Joyce S. Greene]

ROFL, Frieda! Loved your definition of calories - I'll never think of them in any other way now. Pure genius!