~just a flutter'd thought...

~just a flutter'd thought...

A Poem by Frieda P

I smiled in my mind sipping in your words
   coffee in hand, poems warming my intentions
a day without poetry is not my cuppa tea
    so much passion and emotion spilling forth
warmimg pages to be fervently devour'd 
      whets my appetite from within
fills my cup so it runneth over captivated in anticipation...

I see myself reflected back in creamy billows of frothy foam
          fettered in the dark richness of your brew

Languishing in these moments, sharing so many views
    fills my heart with gladness that we have collectively pen'd another day
a poet's ardent soul is meant to be shared and cherished
     like prayers on gentle winds they float en masse on wing'd spirits

I do so on this glorious day as you earnestly
 flutterby...

© 2013 Frieda P


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Yes, indeed, Frieda, a day without poetry is bleak indeed. And a gifted and prolific poet, like you, need never be without a poem.

I see myself reflected back in creamy billows of frothy foam
fettered in the dark richness of your brew

Really beautiful! May your pen never fail to brew delicious cups of poetry.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Joyce, glad you enjoyed this one!



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I like how you associated poems with coffee. Both are my favorite pair. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lovely piece if I do say so myself. I to somehow enjoy reading poetry each day. I guess that means i'm not a man's man? Ah, who cares, lol.

Posted 11 Years Ago


An eloquent masterpiece. Great work Frieda. A compelling read. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I feel like I am feeling all of these feelings with you, your words are magical.

Posted 11 Years Ago


"i had some dreams, they were clouds in my coffee, clouds in my coffee"

very cool imagery in this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


What a beautiful poem with an outstanding theme. I especially loved these lines:

a poet's ardent soul is meant to be shared and cherished
like prayers on gentle winds they float en masse on wing'd spirits

So rich and stunning and plain gorgeous. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


What a beautiful tribute to poetry. To the writer, the reader: those inspired by the wonderful words.
I love this. Trace

Posted 11 Years Ago


I agree Frieda! There's such a need inside to write each day and if I don't write here, it's usually because I am pen and papering lol
This is another gorgeous poem, beautifully worded.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem will never fail

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie mille Kleio.
Beautifully expressed, Frieda! Some days just aren't quite up to speed until we've had our dose of poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I concur Sirrah, thanks so much...

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