~Gentle Quiver

on my mind...

...and then I paused in the moment 

                          to devour the thought

Reviews

[Jack...]

I simply love how you do love, or at least love of before, in this case. Your words always have a certain silkiness to them, smoothly flowing across our eyes in alluring and sensuous stanzas. It is really hard for me to put my finger on the correct words to describe your style of writing except to say...this is definitely a Frieda. Amazing my friend.

[Frieda P]

Awh Jack, you always give me a swelled head, I had to giggle at a Frieda, sounds like something you might order off an Italiano menu....did you order the afrieda? Lol...I'm being silly now, no sleep will do that to you, what I meant to say was grazie mille my dear friend! x

[Opeyemi Jide-Ojo]

i agree with Jack; i can't exactly say how you write. i guess magical would suffice

[rhythm&blues]

One word, stunning. Going into my favorites.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Wow, I'm confused in a good way. My heart has just been in a daze... :) Sweet and lovely! :)

[LadySoDivine]

It's very nice to have good remembrance of past loves. Can't really say that I'm in the same position, but it is definitely a beautiful thing. This was so well written, Frieda, your vocabulary and poetic skills are ones to be envied. :)

[kublakhan27]

I guess I need to start getting to your work earlier love...47 reviews on 417 views doesn't leave me with a whole lot to say that hasn't already been said. Everyone knows how brilliant a writer you are, and there are only so many ways that it can be worded ;P I loved the title and how you utitlized it through the piece. And anything that equates a book with romance is bound to find its way to my heart. Beautiful work Mrs. R :)

[OTownPete]

This is one of my favorite Frieda fantasms...no doubt.

[Derek Nall]

Magical! The words so smooth, I was reading it as if my heart was speaking it. Fantastic!

[Kleio13]

"moonlight smiles and I'm gentle rapture" I love this line

[Julia Kathline]

This poem really spoke to me. Your words were so vivid and left me feeling content. I love your style. Nice work

[Emerald Seas]

Dang Frieda, soft and sultry. Just when I think I can completely give up those little 'thought' moments I get on here and read something like this and my head goes... Hmmm, I think I'll delve into a little daydream for a moment. Thanks!
"we closed our chapter with no song or rhyme" - perfect line for an ending with no ending

Also, that last stanza is superb! Damn those quivers! Lol... Awesome poem, Frieda :)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

What a lovely, plaintive poem. I really enjoyed reading it.