~Voice on the Wind

I hear your voice calling through the meadows

         high above the mountain tops as it beckons 

it's elusive yet a clear reminder of all that is sacred

           that has gone before this time and ever shall be

crisp as a bell it echoes the chant of the ages

      winding through sorrow'd winds to be healed,

dances on ether'd clouds like spiritual autumn leaves

     floating gallantly on the wings of all mankind

bringing forth stillness and peace for all who listen 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"spiritual autumn leaves" Interesting phrase, Frieda... Whoosh, I love listening to the voice on the wind. :) Hmm, just wondering if you really mean "on the wind" or "in the wind" or "of the wind"? I find prepositions confusing and this is the first time I've read of "on the wind"...

[Frieda P]

Actually I borrowed it from the music that's playing, first line is "I hear your voice on the wind" I rather liked how it sounded, thanks Blue.

[Adam Whitworth]

I'm glad these people who listen are getting stillness and peace.

[Frieda P]

Ha 'these people'....thanks Adam.

[Adam Whitworth]

is it the voice of god or some other mysterious thing we're talking about, or do you prefer to keep it vague?

[Frieda P]

It's the voice that calls for peace and speaks of our past and future, it's different for everyone I think, you interpret how you wish...

[Adam Whitworth]

oh thats good , thankyou, i was worried about the 3rd and 4th lines being a bit of a mouthful but now read them as seperate lines and no problem

[OTownPete]

And you rest lightly on my heart and comfort my fears and misgivings. Your friend in words, Pete

[Frieda P]

Sweet review, thanks Pete...............

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice romantic write, the Pre-Raphaelite graphics fit nicely..

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Leslie.

[sushobhan]

An imagery that makes me wonder that WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE wasn't the last.......My goodness,...you have really astounded me cause this is what i say a masterpiece AND
' the usage of words are divine here as well as depicts the heart which has engendered it......

[Frieda P]

Wow thanks for this gracious review sushobhan, I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this one I'm dancing to your review....