~Voice on the Wind

I hear your voice calling through the meadows

         high above the mountain tops as it beckons 

it's elusive yet a clear reminder of all that is sacred

           that has gone before this time and ever shall be

crisp as a bell it echoes the chant of the ages

      winding through sorrow'd winds to be healed,

dances on ether'd clouds like spiritual autumn leaves

     floating gallantly on the wings of all mankind

bringing forth stillness and peace for all who listen 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"spiritual autumn leaves" Interesting phrase, Frieda... Whoosh, I love listening to the voice on the wind. :) Hmm, just wondering if you really mean "on the wind" or "in the wind" or "of the wind"? I find prepositions confusing and this is the first time I've read of "on the wind"...

[Frieda P]

Actually I borrowed it from the music that's playing, first line is "I hear your voice on the wind" I rather liked how it sounded, thanks Blue.

[SyberRose]

Gorgeous Frieda...loved it...you have outdone yourself again and loved the music too...Rose:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Rose. :-)

[Monster ^.^]

It sounds so... timeless! It brings me to a world where voices could be heard everywhere... softly and sweetly. It's like a dejavu of something that haven't happened yet, if that makes sense! But your piece definitely brought things to a higher level!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed, where's that math poem? :-)

[Michael G. Smith]

This speaks to me of the times I've heard the voice of Christ in my life giving me direction.

[Frieda P]

Poetry speaks to us all differently, glad you went there Mike.

[Michael G. Smith]

Yeah but what about that voice? Nature's schizophrenia?

[Michael G. Smith]

call of the wild, lol.

[Ruth]

Dances in the heart this piece and makes me smile and smile more :) x

[Frieda P]

I'm smiling just reading that you're smiling my friend, thanks Poppy :-) x

[Jack...]

A beautiful poem to greet me this day. Indeed, if we listen we can hear our past speaking in memories and our future speaking in memories to to made. Very soft and tender my sweet friend. I loved this one.

[Frieda P]

Thanks sweet Jack, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one...........

[ANTO]

A timeless and ageless piece Frieda. Brilliant!
X

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille ANTnee! xo

[Sami Khalil]

And your voice in the wind will ever be heard and even demanding to be heard. Soooo beautiful and elegant...:)

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille Sami................ :-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)

[Tam Warink]

I think you must still have a bit of 19th Century Romantic in you, Frieda. Still, this is beautifully written and bodes well for your love of words that endure and hold us transfixed within those moments of time we hold precious. Nicely written m'dear.

[Frieda P]

Awh, such a sweet review Tam, thanks so much...

[icelandicblue]

The poem and the song are so exquisite. I love the pairing, although each can stand on its own in soulful elegance.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Anne, appreciate the sentiment.

[Emerald Seas]

A soft and peaceful read, Miss Frieda. Love the photo - fits well with your poem

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sirrah, glad you found it peaceful.